I think she should get the rat treatment. ;)

Cute, can't wait till the other chpaters.

Oh dear. That was creepy. No wonder he hates her type. That was good, and I hope you can write more fanfictions that are sickening and hilarious at the same time!

OMG I loved that! Poor Willard! *hugs him* I'm guessing that's all...*poo, pouts*

Pale is good! Were you going to continue this? It's a good start - very in-character, which is always a plus. Nice work.