this story is good and you should continue.

i am upset that you never continued this but i guess i understand. or i am just saying that. i go for the latter.

Good story please update when you get the time.

continue plz! EVIL HIASHI! hanabi wasn't that mean was she? in the manga and anime. NARUHINA RULES! can't wait for the next chapter!
~pure randomness~
funny line: pi+mc2...but what flavor?

yo its a cool fic but its really really hard to tell whos speakin

who is naruto talking to?

Not a bad story, all in all...I have to critisize you on the horrible way you structure your paragraphs, though.

If it weren't for that, and a few gramatical errors, I'd give you flying colors for your story ^^ As it stands, though, I can only give you a 5 out of 10.

Love the story! n-n

YAY JOJO!!
*cheers*
XD; keep up the good work!

Sorry that I hadnt reviewed, I really apologize. I did read the chapter about the same day it came but I forgot to review it. Now I saw it again in the list so I remembered. Okay about the chapter. It wasnt bad that it was short. In fact I think it fitted it well. because of that the reader wants to keep reading because he or she wants to know what Naruto's idea was. Really proffesional. Keep up the good work

Me: OMG OMG OMG OMG!
I LUV UR STORY SO MUCH!
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON, K?
Excell: ...
Me: Oh, yeah, Excell-sama says "can u please put
more naruXsasu? I luv those two together!"
Excell: er-- LINA!? =hits lina in the head=
Me: Ow... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
...now my head hurts, damnit...

update soon! it's a great story and i can't wait for the next chapter!

Great job~! I can't wait to see how Naruto's training goes~! >w< I hope naruto can prove himself to Hinata's father. ^_^ Keep up the great job~!

Sa~! hey Jo jo! XD nice first chapter... I just get confused by what are thoughts and other random things. O.o so... yeah. *runs off to 'review' this story* you're a brave one... btw, what's Lisa's story's link??

gah..you stopped writing it..
please continue it in the summer,
or anytime,Me like your ficcy^^;;
well thats it...
later
kArU