Wow... Am I glad you are doing a second one. My favorite character is Rin, she is so nice to everyone, and sweet, even to Jaken.
Just keep writing. This was great.
Kyrin

god :D

You write like a real author! Great job!

OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY!
must...read...sequel...
WHEE! ^o^

UH...the stories really good...but i dont really like the ending...i mean it...wasnt even really a ending...i HOPE...that you continue with the story!

great story im off to read your sequal!!

Your story is so great! Promise that you'll write a sequel soon.

love it

really really good fic... ^^...

HawkAngel

Wow! This story is really great! I read it all in one go (I even skipped dinner ^^)! How does Rin smell different? What's that word that begins with M? I'm dying to know! Argh! This is so frustrating, I feel powerless! I want to know so badly! Please keep writing, your great at it! ^^

I'll look out for your sequel.

P.D: Now I'm going to have sth to eat or I'll die of starvation. >.

awesome story!...

I just want to thank you for making such a great and interesting story. You really got my attention and I really wanted someone to make a "great" story like you did so I just want to thank you again. Oh yeah and I am a writter myself but by reading this you really made me look bad when it comes to writting such wonderful story so I hope that encourages you to make other stories as well.

I love this story
great job
:)
now im off to read the sequel bc i want SEsshie and Rin together!! And to know what happens
great fic

i.love.this.story.

i am being really really really patience...but it will wear thin...please continue and write another chapter... you can't just stop here...it does not feel complete...so please continue...