|Reviews for Neville L and the Tradition of the Last Dance|
| BansheeGirl 12/7/05 . chapter 1
This is seriously one of the BEST AD/MM fics that I have ever read. And don’t take that lightly – I am very critical when it comes to fanfiction. Especially AD/MM fanfiction, because there seem to be very few authors who can actually get the characterisation of Minerva and, particularly Albus, right. But this story was so perfect. Especially the dialogue between Minerva and Albus. I couldn’t believe some of the things you had dear Dumbledore say – it was as if JKR herself had penned the comments. They were *so* perfectly in character. You’ve really concreted my faith in this ship!
Oh, and the naïve thoughts from Neville were terrific too. Just brilliant; they really helped with the mood of the fic. How I do love that little bumbling, but oh-so-brave Gryffindor!
This is going on my Favourites list. It has truly earned a spot there. Well done, and thankyou for such a great read.
| miss mcGonagle 11/20/05 . chapter 1
Oh man, that was awsome, the perfect fic to read after seeing GOF. Neville was written so well, poor guy.
| ADandMMforever 12/13/04 . chapter 1
Lucky little Lion! I wanna stumble in on them! Maybe I could have a bit of a better story then, but I might have to agree with Neville; it might be be a bit disturbing in his shoes. Knowing me, I'd start clapping when they started kissing! I'd walk up, point a finger at the two of them and start saying things like, "I knew it! I knew it all along! I told them that there was something going on between the two of you besides "friendship and employer/employee", but did they listen? No! Don't listen to crazy old Lily! She doesn't know what she's talking about! She's a bloody lunatic!", then I'd just walk out muttering to myself, I wouldn't even think about points. None would probably be taken away though, they'd both probably be in too much of a shock that someone found out about them to even speak, and then I'd just walk back to the Gryffindor Common Room and then back up to my dormitory and write down exactly what I saw, in perfect detail. Okay . . . this review is getting a little long and I'll stop typing now and not continue to bore you with my obsessive- compulsive, mind-less babble. Good luck on future works of art and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories!
All my love,
| 27dayz 11/13/04 . chapter 1
its always neville, isn't it? i really loved this story...neville's just so funny to put into awkward situations...good job!
| soft lite 9/24/04 . chapter 1
Very funny! I love poor Neville accidently stumbling upon them!
| Intelligent Witch 9/4/04 . chapter 1
doesn't anyone else feel sorry for neville?
he always seems to be waling in on them
although this one was beautiful unlike the other one where there was leather and chains and whips involved
| bookwmnjan 6/20/04 . chapter 1
Delightful! Poor Neville.
Thanks for sharing.
| Karana Belle 6/1/04 . chapter 1
Ah, this is so cute! it's like happily ever after!
it isn't fair! Neville always gets to see the juicy stuff! i wish i could!
oh wait, HA ha i just read it! don't i feel stupid.
this is a really good one-shot!
| Auntarctic 5/7/04 . chapter 1
HI! Cool fic. I was playing the Harry Potter Computer Game and it turns out that none of the "Weird Sisters" are women. They are all men. They wear dresses and stuff, one of them even plays the bagpipes. You are probably wondering how I know this from a video game. The "Weird Sisters" aparantly have their own chocolate frog wizard cards, and on the game you can view the cards that you collect. Anyway, I said this because you mentioned the band. This is a great fic!
| Cranky Cauldron sign in What Who has time for that 4/11/04 . chapter 1
Excellent, I've been reading some appalling pieces (yesterday) just to fix my AD/MM craze, to find this absolute gem hiding in the past... where have I been? The dance scenes were exquisite... and did they by any chance know Neville was there?
I started reading the rest of your After the Battle but got booted offline, I almost don't want to finish it... must it end?
Nouveau is giving me hell, I keep writing ridiculously soppy crap, I deleted about a 1,0 words or rubbish the other day and then wrote another lot of useless tosh last night. As you can see, it is war at the mo.
I bow to your genius...
| crazyharrysfireworks1239 3/30/04 . chapter 1
I LOVE this story! It has become one of my all-time favorites; it's so well-written and I can just SEE Neville biting his lip, etc. He's perfectly in character and it was such a warm moment between AD and MM! It gives me that lovely fuzzy feeling :) hehe
Thank you so much for writing it!
| Kricket 3/18/04 . chapter 1
Oh my God! I loved it so much! Keep it going! Don't stop! Poor Neville! But it's so sweet and cute!
| canarycreams 3/15/04 . chapter 1
Aw..that was so adorable..what a great idea!
I'm sitting here with this huge stupid grin on my face because that was so good..and cute!
| mascaret 3/15/04 . chapter 1
Poor Neville! Another great piece.
| Laura Kay 3/14/04 . chapter 1
LOL, Aw, that was too cute! I loved it! Laura :)