Hey I really like your stories but one thing I wanted to point out that doesn't make sense is in the previous chapter, if Brennan was on a ventilator then he would not have been able to talk or call for Jesse.

Great ending. So, Lexa and Jesse know about Shalimar and Bren. And Shal and Bren know about Lexa and Jesse. But neither are telling the other?? I liked the story. You are really good at writing. So, evil guy is dead and they saved a person. Cool!!

Hi!
I think you've improved your writing, you are describing the action and the feelings. I can sense what the people are feeling, terror, fear, happiness, sadness... The different in your storie is that, you transmit a lot of things, and I do love read it.
Thanks for your storie. I hope you'll continue writing.
(Sorry for the grammar, I'm not very good at it)

REad you soon. Cristina

Great story! read each chapter and loved it. I am very happy to read that it will not be the end and that there will be a third part. I will be looking foward to reading it and any other story you write, especially if it has some Shal/Bren in it lol.

Thank you for such an amazing story!! I am sad it's over, but happy to know it's not ENTIRELY over!! But meanwhile, this was a beautiful chapter! I really enjoyed reading the beginning scene with Jesse and Shal. It was a tender momment between them that wrapped up all they had gone through together in this story, and gave them completion. I liked how she was able to bring a smile to his face despite his anger, that is so true to their relationship!
And the paragraph with Bren and Shal being reunited was amazing. I was holding my breath while reading it, and then broke out into a huge grin! I loved it all! Again,a brilliant job capturing the emotion and even a bit of the awkward unknown between them.
I really liked how you lightened the end as well with Bren and Shal thinking they could keep their relationship a secret while Jesse and Lexa are watching at the same time. Very cute! Can't wait to see what Jesse and Lexa dream up to do to them!
Thank you for an amazing story, it's been a great ride!

Loved this chapter, and this entire story. I really liked the fun suspense at
the end involving the Brennen and Shalimar relationship. You have done
an outstanding job with this story for not watching any of season 3. Can't
wait for the third installment, I'd like to see the Dominion go down. Hope
it's out soon.

aw. great way to end it, even though i am sad that it's over.
yeah! a third part! that'll so rock! i completely can't wait! :)
i LOVED the chapter. it went off on such a cute sweet note, just how i love for thingsd to (temporarily) end.
happy everything!

So sad that this story is over, but I was very happy to hear that there will be a third story. And if it is half as great as the first two, I am sure everyone will love it. I really liked Jesse thoughts is the beginning of this chapter, about time. You once again turned this story poetic. I loved it! Thanks so much for writing such a great story!

poor shalimar. How ironiic. brennan fiinlly woke up and found shalimar bleedin. *smirk*

another great chapter. I can't wait to find out how shal is, adn how she was injurered. Please update soon!

Thanks for your story. It's very interesting. I think that you really have talent for this.

oh. i DO like this chapter. aw, hope shal's ok. halle leaving was cool, i liked her thoughts and good-bye.
eck, don't worry about taking long for updating. hangovers are very valid excuses. annoying, aggravating, stupuid, painful, excuses.

I love this chapter! First of all because it's entirely devoted to my favorite couple! :) But beyond that, the emotion is absolutely amazing. With all the detail, I could see and even hear everything they could, and I could feel their thoughts--that is mark of brilliancy in writing, when we can become one with the characters.
I loved how Shal disregarded her own health to stay by Brennan's side, and then to have Brennan do the same for her when he awakes to find her collapsed.
The paragraph about his life being one big irony was excellent, I really liked that comparision.
And now they are both in danger-argh! I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for updating, and with a hangover no less! :) Thanks!!

OMG. No way. i cant believe it. Brennan gt shot too? that sucks i hope he is alright. Man your writing has improved scince you last stroy. wow. you r good.

AHH! Please please please post the next chapter soon! I need to know what happends! I hope Brennan is gonna be ok. Great job! =D