 Inu Youkai Lover^.^ 2005-07-29 . chapter 12 I really loved your story . I really really hope you continue. I can't wait for the next chapter. Though I do have one small suggestion. It was kinda confusing the way everyone though outloud but you didn't attach any names and sometime some people sounded like others and you couldn't tell who was thinking what and what ws happening. It all got kinda confusing. But I eventually figured it out. But a helpful hint: try to be more clear when your writing what someone thinks and give an obvious hint to whose saying what or attch their name to it. |
 Kina13 2005-03-12 . chapter 12Hey, i love it so far! I really hope you update it soon! Please PLEASE email me when you do at salinebabe13@ Thank you so much for the story! |
 KuroNekoSama1990 2004-11-20 . chapter 7Wow. That's depressing. Makes it a good fic though. |
 KuroNekoSama1990 2004-11-20 . chapter 3Oh, very good! The prelude was perfect. And for a beginner you are very good. ^_^ |
 Inu-ears 2004-08-28 . chapter 12please update! i love this story to death!! |
 ... 2004-08-21 . chapter 12 ah! i read it again! i read it again! muwa ha ha ha! yay! ^^ *i am terribly bored...and waiting is boring* la la la la la. I READ IT ALL OVER AGAIN! *muwa ha ha ha ha* *insanely hyper* ah, your writing does this to me. it makes me happy. NOW...WRITE MORE IN SOMETHING! I COMMAND THEE! |
 Amaryl 2004-07-19 . chapter 12 I really love MxS fluff. Plz put some in!! XD But I do love your writing as well. I caught the feeling of everything. Miroku's horror was well done. :D enough of my ranting. This was a good chapter! |
 ... 2004-06-21 . chapter 12 *very large grin* i love you. *blinks* *still smiling sickly* i love mirokuXsango. *blinks* that chapter made me sickly happy. *blinking* *typing slowly* brother's home. have to go to strings. |
 PurpleRoses 2004-06-20 . chapter 12Um...interesting chapter even though it was short. Very unexpected. I like it. Update soon~!
Purple Roses~* |
 Twilight Sky 2004-06-20 . chapter 12Hmm...I've always pondered on writing a Kikyou fic...trying to tell others that she isn't as bad as she seems, once you peel off the bitterness coating her. A fic from Kikyou's point of view... now if I just had time. ^-^
Poor Miroku! I'm so glad his love for Sango is so deep that he won't let anyone else influence him ^-^. YAY MIROKU!
Waiting for the next chapter!
~Twilight Sky |
 Twilight Sky 2004-06-15 . chapter 11I absolutely agree with you--Kikyou has all these complex emotions bubbling inside of her, layer after layer of pain, hurt, confusion, and guilt. Mainly the confusion rises to the surface, which gives her an evil demeanor and causes people to hate her. But I'm so glad that you're delving into Kikyou's emotions and unearthing those other, better emotions ^-^.
YAY! Hurray for homework procrastination! ^-^ You might ask, it's summer there's no homework...-_-; Alas, stupid old math summer school. Whenever I procrastinate I just go on to FF.net and look around...click around...thus this is how I ended up here ^-^.
I love your fic! It's so suspenseful! (And don't say it isn't!) Love your writing style, also. You can describe things so wonderfully, detailing them, but not so much that all of the adjectives are stacked fifty deep on top of each other and you can't see the real action anymore. -_-;
Don't worry about short chapters! Myself, I find it's rather difficult to filter out 5,0word long chapters...^-^;
Everyone seems so in character. You did a good job on them. And poor Kagome! ;_; I felt really sad for her.
You know when Kagura went around and told Miroku, Kagome, and Sango their worst fears? You definitely chose excellent ones for all of them. I couldn't think of anything worse.
Excellent job! *gets out Favorites lists* ^-^ I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
~Twilight Sky |
 schwartze 2004-05-16 . chapter 11 i love you. do you know how long i've been waiting for this? i thought i would die if it wasn't up. i love it. i love you. i love life.
*look what pocky does to me*
whe |
 PurpleRoses 2004-05-16 . chapter 11Good! Slightly confusing at times but good! Update soon!
PurpleRoses*~ |
 Kouta Arina 2004-05-10 . chapter 10 AWESOME!luv it ta death! now...WRITE MORE!i command u!o, and call me or leave a comment, i wanna c if we can get together soon, maybe this weekend...maybe jenee too! ill check w/ the rents! |
 Erste 2004-05-09 . chapter 10i think mother is going to die. i like that chapter. that chapter was good. reading that made me happy in the fact that it had been posted and sad...because it was sad. *yay*
i watched your fansubs without sound...*stabs speakers that refuse to work*
i want to see your fanfic animated...
that would be very nifty... |