great story but whats with the &147's??

ok um u REALLY need a better beta, i couldnt really tell who was talking but good plot

Interesting fic. Good job with it! When you get the chance, also, could you go through the last chapter and fix the thing that is going on with the &148, it makes it a bit difficult to read. Good luck in the future with whatever you end up doing.

Cool idea!

So cute! Holly really cares about Artemis. YAY! Artys scared of spiders.so am I.

This is a great story! I liked how you made Opal save Arty because her little sister got killed by a spider, it made the story a lot more interesting!

Wow! I'm speachless (which for me is highly unusual) Well done!

Ohh, that was great! Liked it! Nice ending..

Great story! Loved it! I think your chapter translated a little funny to the Internet, though. Every time you use quotes or apostrophes, there's numbers instead. But I still liked the last chapter.

I thought it was excellent!

Hey ID! Great ending! I miss it already! (starts crying) I loved it! Oh yeah, I have my internet back. lol. Great job.

nice ending. this is good just the way it is without any sequels or stuff like that.

From the very last sentence... Ooh..
That was the vest way to end it.
With that sentence.

Keep up the good work.

Sigh... A wonderful story has ended. Well, write more!

This is probably the best chapters I've ever read (in general) on !! No really. I'm not just saying this. You capture the mood perfectly! I felt like CRYING when I read the stuff about how Arty would have to forget about Holly! CRYING! Very good job!