This is so amazing I was brought to tears- You really captured the essance of pain and neglect and abuse. I actually want to thank you for being a amazing writer with my hand on my 2 writing trophies!

(Hands a lage golden medal, sash and crown to Ms.Kinnikufan)

Horray for good UM writers!

-signed Marchello

I think you really did Bone Cold justice with this! It was very well-written, I enjoyed it (and it's hard to keep my attention, especially when it focuses on a character that I don't have great affection for.) It kept me reading until the end. Excellent job with the descriptions! Your writing is just getting better and better, it's great to see how far you've come! Keep up the great work!