I really enjoyed this story! It is totally sad and tragic!! Seeing Sirius SO heartbroken and distraught just rips my heart apart!

You did a wonderful job in showing his softer side. I am usually a fan of the powerful side of Sirius, but when it comes to James, his strong exterior just shatters. I do feel extremely bad for poor Remus too, playing second fiddle to James. He knows that he'll never replace James in Sirius's heart and that is even sadder than Sirius losing James in the first place!

This is definitely a tear jerker...I know I went through several tissues. Thanks for touching my heart.

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:sniffle: beautiful. that fic actually made me tear up. it was wonderful, and really depressing. ^_^ i think you succeeded. hehe.

I loved this fic. It was great and really, really sad, well i guess that's the story of the Marauders. You captured them so well, and now im gonna go read the sequel.

Fantastic!

Aww... you're such a good writer!

holly **... owy. my heart really hurts. *pokes* you made me cry! *blushes*
this was amazing. you deserve a gazilion reviews.
i almost hate you for making it so sad... *cries* errg... it was perfect. *sob* i'm not bullshiting. this is one of the best stories I've read. I LOVE the way you write.
forgive my shity review, i'm kinda way too emotional right now. *breaths*
wait. HOW CAN YOU HATE THE MARAUDERS? *checks for fever* but that's insane... and this comming from a girl who'd be sorted in slytherin no doubt if it were all real... i love them all (minus peter, he's a looser). they're perfection... i'm obsessed, hehe, you may have noticed. oh well, you entitled to your own opinion, i just don't understand.
going to read ur other stuff, later.