So good. Kill Martha. Please keep Pheobe and Cole together. they need to be together. I love this story. Please finish soon.

Things are spicing up. Update soon, I really loved this chapter!

OH SHIZZLE!!
Great Chapter!!
Update Soon Son!!

great chapter ...
can't wait for more

hurry with the next chapter please!i love this story!

You know I have to start by saying I really love this story. I think I've reviewed it before. I'm looking forward to finding out if Martha is a demon or working for evil. And I want to know where things are going relationship wise. That said, I'm going to add something I never have to a review before...You are such a good writer(plot wise) that you either need to use a grammer checker or get a beta reader. Good stories are often detracted from by these type of errors. You might be using a translation program, which adds to this problem. This is not a flame or a slam, I will read no matter what. But I think you have a great story that could benefit from the kind of help I mentioned. Hope for more soon.

Have just read all of this. Absolutely love it! PLease make sure that Phoebe and Cole get together, please! Keep writing!

Go, go, go. I support Phoebe on this plan!

Very nice chapter. I liked the idea of getting Cole back the way Phoebe did it in the story. Call me crazy if you want or not believe me, but as I read the story, I imagine Martha being a demon who wants to get her hands on Phoebe and Cole's child even before I read the parts where the sisters think that. Thanks for not forgetting about us even on your vacation. Have a good time and please continue writing.

hehehe will wait impatiently for the next chapter. Got a real kick out of the carnival.

great chapter

cool its really good and well thought out hurry with the next part though im hooked!

please make cole love Phoebe!:)

Great chap.!! I hate Martha! Hah, LOL! Update soon! It's cool that Chris takes after Phoebe with the scheming things.

Love your story... post as soon as you can!