that was great. write more!

it's beautiful

Truly talented! Good job!

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I just loved this, made me chuckle and feel all warm inside. As for being concerned about getting Pilot right in the sequel, no problem. "Fire" and "Burn" were both good stories and you should feel proud of yourself. I am off to have a good old chuckle. Thanks. Ali D :)

Awwwwwwwwwww, so sweet. I love it! God, you have to write more!

I love it. Brilliant!

That was great! I really enjoyed your story...both parts. Keep writing :-)

That was really well written and really, really sweet!

Evening

You write well

MikeJo

That was fantastic. Part two was even better than part one!

That was so beatiful! Please write another one. Maybe when John and Aeryn make to Earth.

Wonderful Story.

"I guess I'll just have to burn."

Goddess Bless and Follow the Path,

Ellie

Another very good story

The best ever!...I've read alotta shippy fanfic from alotta series but this is definitely the best lol...i got this feeling i was there for real and that little bit with chiana was terrific :) John was down perfectly and I soooo got this image of Claudia Black's face when Aeryn quipped things, very funny. Now, on to part two!...