Very good, I like the premise of the story. I look forward to more!

Well done! Good, enjoyable story. Well written. Nicely thought out. Good job!

Excellent fight scene. I would liked for it to have been longer but it was good! Nicely done story!

This chapter moves the story right along. it is well written and informative. Nicely done! :)

Excellent chapter here as well. Nicely done explanation. Interesting to see Jim's reaction. After all he isn't exactly a modern type of guy either, is he?

Excellent confrontation! Very well done! Exciting!

Interesting chapter. Excellent Flashback. Nicely handled way to give additional information.

Interesting beginning. Nicely written.

Hey - this is a neat angle I never thought of. And I like Sentinel too.

On to the next story :)

Better hurry up with the updates, I'm almost out of material to read! ;)

I liked this story and I hope to see more from you. :)

keep penning,

Marns

pobody's Nerfect

Blair as an immortal: Cool idea. Very good first story. Very historically accurate I hope this is the first in a series maybe?
AB

I really enjoyed your story. It was a real fun read. Is this the final chapter, or will there be some sort of wrap up?

Not too shabby. More please.