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PO
2009-12-13 . chapter 11
Dude! It's been OVER 2 YEARS since you last updated! Post a new chapter already!
hermonine
2009-03-01 . chapter 11
Great story. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Abril
2009-01-12 . chapter 11
i love this story! update please thumbs up!!
z
2009-01-12 . chapter 11
just an idea...since this is their last year, maybe some of peters new personality-type-thing is showing through. i dunno, just an idea. good story
Hotgirlow
2008-12-28 . chapter 11
hope u update soon.
m
2008-08-08 . chapter 11
for a timetravel fic you have done a wonderful job. i personally hate it when writers have someone go back in time and have them become bossom pals from day 1. the fact that you have the characters being a little wary of hermione makes it more realistic. keep up the good work and please update soon!
thundever1
2008-04-26 . chapter 11
Great chap, brilliant interactions, please update soon.
akuma-chan0326
2008-02-07 . chapter 11
its ok. i know that Hermione should be freaking out a lot by being stuck in the past but what happened to her Griffindor courage?
years of fighting alongside of Harry and Ron must have given her something.
the two girls, especially Katherine, seem rather rude. true they don't know where she's from or anything like that but they come off as shrill and harpy-ish.
mona-rose
2008-02-05 . chapter 11
I think your story is good and I know everyone has their own writing style, but I find that you put way too much detail on your surroundings. I mean a book is supposed to help you use your imagination, not tell you excatly how everything looks as if it's a movie and I pretty much end up skimming through most of those paragraphs because they end up making me sleepy and not want to finish the story.
And you tend to repeat the same things sometimes like Snape's billowing cloak and descibing the characters as if people don't already know who they are (but would be a good thing if they're orignal characters). I must admit that those things about you're writing style kinda annoy me.
I'm definitely not saying that my writing is any better, it's probably worse for all I know. But I was hoping to let you know how I felt about the story and how I think you could improve it.
Feel free to hide or delete this review if you like but i hope you take what I said into consideration.
On a possitive note, I hope, I do like your story in general and I look forward to more chapters soon. I also liked the fact that some don't trust her completely given the situation that time is in with Voldemort and I could relate to her for feeling bad for barging in on them.
Astrid
2008-01-13 . chapter 11
This is one of the best written fics I've read! Really well done. PLEASE please update soon!!
little miss michelle
2008-01-04 . chapter 11
Great story. I cant wait to see what happens next
thealycat.
2007-12-21 . chapter 11
PLEASE update soon, this is SO good! and one of my names in a story was Katherine Black, so i was LOLing when i read it. =]
yuki san1
2007-12-20 . chapter 11
Please update soon, I can't wait to see some Hermione/Lupin X3
Opy
2007-10-30 . chapter 11
update soon!
Caramel Crazy
2007-10-30 . chapter 11
Brilliant story. I loved this latest chapter, especially the new characters! Update soon, please!
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