 Jeanetteg 2008-09-17 . chapter 8Is there a sequel? I do hope so... Great story. It's been so long, I'm hoping you're still around to come up with more stories... |
 intodust 2004-04-07 . chapter 8I thought the ending fit well, adding to the overall "episode" feel. I think that's what I liked best about the story: the way it read like a first season episode. The characterization was spot-on, and you had a plot that allowed for extra development without being overwhelmed (I liked the side story about Bling's relationship) . . . and you managed to wrap it up so well!
Thanks for writing this! |
 Bob 2004-04-07 . chapter 8 Lovely! But I love a happy ending so, is ther going to be a sequel? |
 2004-04-06 . chapter 8 I thought the ending fit well, adding to the overall "episode" feel. I think that's what I liked best about the story: the way it read like a first season episode. The characterization was spot-on, and you had a plot that allowed for extra development without being overwhelmed (I liked the side story about Bling's relationship) . . . and you managed to wrap it up so well!
Thanks for writing this! |
 agmgdafan 2004-04-06 . chapter 8 Hey,
Very good work !! Maybe a sequel would be interesting. Thanks for this amazing story. |
 Firmament 2004-04-06 . chapter 8Very nice indeed. Such a episode feel to it, where they resolve their difference and become a little closer, but are too scared to take that step.
Beautiful little story. |
 Angie731 2004-04-05 . chapter 8 Hey,
Great story! Loved it all the way through. Not many of us M/L shippers out there. We gotta stay strong with the struggle. You should do a sequel. I wanna see the happily ever after ;-) (should you so choose) |
 KingfisherFeline 2004-04-05 . chapter 8I thought that was an appropriate ending. I hope that you're cosidering a sequal to perhaps give us a happy ending.
Keep up the great writing. |
 MistyX 2004-04-05 . chapter 8Great work, Boo :)
I gotta admit, I love these kinds of stories, where you go against the stream. Fixing Max up with another guy probably angered a lot of M/L:ers out there, but I relish these kinds of gems amongst fanfics; the ones that dare go against the others... and then turn out to be good :)
(I'm trying on one of those M/L stories myself, got one chapter o'it posted here on ff.net. It's not the usual kind, but hey, I'm not usual either :) )
I liked the fact that you didn't end it happily ever after, cos like oyu said, that just wouldn't be Max or Logan. Their lives, their relatiobship aren't like that...
So, in conclusion, I praise you for your courage to do what you thought was right, and stick with the idea you began with, not changing just because the audience wanted it :) That's arare quality among writers, but it also distinguishes the good ones, from the not-so-good ones!
A continuation would be nice, some kind of follow up story to this one... :) Let us know!
If it's anything, anything at all, don't hesitate to hit me back at thematrixhasme@hotmail.com :)
Keep up the good work! |
 SunySal 2004-04-05 . chapter 8 Perfect ending. It was very Dark Angel and not at all like a soap.
I am so happy you didn't fall for the "romantic novel" type ending.
More Max and Logan please. |
 idolhands452 2004-04-05 . chapter 8i think we need a sequel... that would be most excellent. i liked how you didn't solve the problems right away and kinda left it open for more, so a sequel might be an excellent idea. i really liked this keep up the amazing writing! |
 huntress k 2004-04-05 . chapter 8 That was so much like S1 he was gonna say it but didnt have the courage lol. That was a great story i loved it! I have one word for you "SEQUEL"!! If you dont have a plot for one you can always do a story where they go on a vacation seeing as how after this story they definately need one! :0D |
 Original D 2004-04-05 . chapter 8*aplaudes*. i didnt mind that it wasnt a 10 % happy end, it was still good.. and i cant wait to read you next story! |
 missundaztood 2004-04-05 . chapter 8 I really enjoyed reading this story, all chapters!
Thanks for adding the epilogue, I'm glad Max and Logan talked, the open ending is just perfect, with much room for a sequel ?! |
 M/L Only 2004-04-05 . chapter 8Nice ending - you kept them in character. Well done :) |