Eh? I've never reviewed this before? I could've sworn I had...Simply put, I like this. And I hope you eventually add more...

Met you at devART _ I'm so glad you're getting everything set and fixing up stuff. Anyways, if you ever need a beta, just e-mail me. I have no real life so...*laughs*

Greetings from hell, Black-Meteora.

Ack...all the mystery is killing me. Hmm...more description between dialogue would be good. That's the only thing I can gripe about. I think the story is coming along very nicely, and I'm dying for some light to be shed on the mystery

Aw! Love the Karasuma/Sakaki interaction...are they getting closer? An excellent, flowing chapter that moved along nicely. Again, I was impressed by your Doujima characterisation - something you do just makes her seem right in my head. Well done!

We've been fed a little more information, too...its good to see we're slowly learning more about the mystery surrounding Kari and Tano, as well as the "man" you spoke of.

A very good read, worth the wait. *grins*

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Sakura, why didn't you tell me I HADN'T REVIEWED? I thought I'd at least done this chapter, dammit...I mean I've read the whole thing, but I just must have forgotten. Sorry!

This story is very intriguing. You have a brisk, efficient style that I enjoy reading, and while the plot is at times rather mysterious, the story itself is easy to follow. I like your character interaction - in this chapter, I must highlight the Doujima/Kosaka relationship done very nicely - and you managed to keep my interest throughout the entire thing.

Well done! Love your work (I know I've told you, but apparantly NOT HERE ;_;) and I hope to see more...sooner...and stuff.

o.O was that an implication of a sakaki/miho date just there? XD

well, at first, i couldn't seem to get interested... i guess it's because i'm used to amon and robin being the main leads. but after a couple chapters, thigns started to sped up, with 'incident's P well, near the end, it just stringed me along. XD even though i was very tired... in fact *mumble*i'lltalktoyouonimtomorrow*mumble* ;; am really tired...

this is definately NOT a bad story, sakura-san. _ sure there may be flaws and such, but the thoughts of the characters are nice and in depth. hehe, nice to see more miho and sakaki POVs. most that i read are robin and amon. )

Not bad, a little wordy, a little heavy handed at times, but not bad.

I like seeing Sakaki as the main character in a story. Karasuma is depicted well without going overboard. She can be overboard as she is anyway.

For those who will jump my case, have fun. I will not respond because I really do not care.

Hello, since you reviewed my story and didn't like it I thought I might review yours. I hold no grudge. And I have to say...your a really good writer. I really like this. I hope that you update soon. And..I know it might seem weird but could you give me tips on how to get better? Email me at if you would. Keep up the good work!

Hey, I saw what Kosh wrote, it's not true, don't listen to her, she's EVIL, I think she want's revenge, as you were critisizing my work some, hmm :/ Hey, and since when has SHE been watching anime anyway? I'll have to ask her thant...great story, no really what old "Kosh the Beef Jerky" said, I think she lied,

-yells at Kosh-

I taught you spanish and Japanese, you evil, evil thing!

But yeah, she's real smart and all, and uh, yeah, hanging out with insane me, but why?

WHR rules! Even if I only started watching it a couple weeks ago, this story is awesome!

Update soon :) Please

oh, and about my name being spelled Okami, as you asked me, I'm lazy, and like the way it looks better this way, not, Ookami, It looks weird to my eyes...

oh yeah, I am ignoring your suggestions, (theres no offece, but, I like to learn from my own mistakes)

And I am trying to put some of this so called -effort- into my writing, I write mostly, as I've said countless toimes, for myself, and a bit for Kitsune, hey, I like to entertain HER, more than anyone else, and as long as she and I are happy, I'm really happy.

anyway, enough of my blabbery talk, Really great fic, GREAT GREAT JOB!

-goes to find The 'Beef Jerky' and hit her on the head a few times-

Lovely chapter! I'm ::cough:: a little late, so whatever I say will copy off of other people. :P Update soon!

Oh yeah. "I think *you're* writing is as bad in some cases as Okami's..." I thought you said you were talented in the manner of English. O.o? Oh, and if there were any mistakes (grammer, punctuation, etc), maybe you should talk to her betas?

Liliah

Hello there, I am Ms. Kosh, One of Okami Youkai’s friends, hmm, maybe you’ve heard of her? I’m very talented in the manner of English and language. I speak three languages English, Spanish, and Japanese. I think you’re writing is as bad in some cases as Okami’s, only sometimes, yours is worse, no offence there, but it’s only true. Like, for instance, sometimes, it gets very complicated, and confusing, reading your writings because at times you don’t say who said what in parts of the story. The story isn’t very enjoyable, or at least not for me… In some instances, I saw some punctuation and grammar errors, and you criticize Okami for having some! Your story’s just as equal in mistakes as Okami’s, and I’m one to know that!

My first name has not been given for personal reasons

Without further mention, goodbye, darkenedsakura

-walks off-

Ms. Kosh.

This is awesome! I'm glad someone with real talent is writing a WHR fic. Please keep it up, this rocks my socks _

Very well done, you do an excellent job of portraying all the character properly and I love the way you manage to keep the suspense alive. Please do continue the story and update soon.

This is good. Too good almost. Are you using a craft of some sort?

Interesting chapter. I'm not sure I understand the method with which Tano and Kari are hiding their true identities-is it Witches' power?-but it's already obvious who they truly are. I wonder when they'll reveal themselves to the STN-J? And who would bug Sakaki's motorcycle? Hm. The only suggestion for this chapter I would make is that I missed the little separator bar you had in the last chapter, that designated between different scenes...but overall, nicely done.