ROTFLMAO! Oh my gosh sis! This is hallarious! You did a great job. Like they said, spelling errors, but there weren't too many. Great job!

Kwhahahaha~!

Still a lot of spelling errors, but it’s coming along quite nicely ^^

After the first chapter, I wasn't sure what to expect, but now I find this hilarious! It's the second chapter that does it. There are some spelling mistakes, but other than that, great job!

Ah well, it sounds quite promising, but there’s some spelling errors, especially in the summary and title (It’s “abduction