great job :

One of my favourite pairings, completely against canon though, and it rarely gets written about. I hope you come back to this some day!

wow! please do continue :)

i like the SaberXApril pairing :)

arrgh! thats it? where is the end? no end? *snif*

okay *breath* sorry, am a little bit frustrated, hate stories without an end. Theres the problem, cause I like your story.

So the only solution will be, to write an end...or at least the next chapter...please!

if you do, Ill promis to review. okay?

cya

rosha

PS: Topsword? *giggle* btw. nice Idea to make April speak in sign language.

This is an extremely confusing fan-fiction. The juxta-position of stylized anime/manga commentary inserted behind your "main" story is rather distracting and rather unnecessary. So, while the concept of writing April and Saber's first meeting is cute and has potential, your tale could be outlined after a fashion much more friendly to your readers; also, further description of the characters and their physical surroundings could pump up the "realism" level of your story, despite the many "kawaii" attempts.

Sorry it took me so long to review chapter 2. I didn't notice the chapter count changed m(_ _)m
Anyways, your writing style is good, not like most of first-time fanfic writers.
I especially liked the classroom scene _
Looking forward to the next chapter!

The idea of "Topsword" was incredible but most amusing :)) it kept me smiling every time l saw it :) have never known eyes may be "sapphire green" tho' :) as well as that Fireball had ''emerald eyes'' :) the plotline seemed utmostly strange so far, but as the author said it's fanfiction :)

Argh... Cliffhanger... Short, but fine. A classroom, maths, chatting durng education... Sounds like my schooltimes.. *chuckles*
Wonder how this will go on...
Perhaps you could be a little more detailed, only a suggestion.. :-)

Hi,
it's a nice AU. I like esp. the dream-scenes.
Please, continue!

I would like to read more! This time, its too short to give a real review.
But so far, it it has a mysterious atmosphere, which makes the reader to want more.