it´s great, but all very confusing. but i suppose that is deliberate.
different alternatives are always fun. i just wonder how harry could have woken up at the dursleys for a short time when he was already in the other universe..

cheers
astrido

That was really good! Please dont have Sirius going out with Remus slash, because I dont like that pairing. I really like Sirius though, he's one of my favorite characters, but just not Remus. I dont know why I dont like him that much. I dont really know why though.

This is a really great story your writing! plz post again soon.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

wow! this is pretty awesome! update plz? you havent for a long long time! =(

ok so the story is very good. but there is one thing you could do to make it easier to follw. when you do a scene change put a marker or something between the last paragraph and the new one.

I have no words for how much I LOVE this story!

hi,
i loved the story very much. except for the last part, where they just had a body switch or something like it.
i liked the idea better that harry really had dreamed one of the two worlds as it seemed to be the case for the most time.

draco with kittens is sweet. i loved that part very much. when harry visited him , i mean. but you forgot about the ring. harry didn't give it back.
anyway, please update soon.

cyu as^^

I love this story :D
Please update.

Hello!

Nice way of putting reality and dreams...and what did Voldemort do to send Harry to a world were he's relatively happy... I think it has something to do with the dreams you mentioned about Death Eathers surrounding Harry...

Oh My God!!Please update! Don't be mean!

Keep up the good work!

Jya ne!

-Senko-

I love it! I can't wait to see how the unmagical Harry reacts to Draco...and I can't wait to see how things work out for the real Harry and how his friends are planning on helping him! update soon!

aw! By the end of the chapter, I was like about to cry! Seriously! It's so so good. The only thing, though, could you possibly make a note or something if you're uh...like "switching words" so to speak because I'm kind of confused about that :)

more!!

GIRL THIS WAS REALLY GOOD!! AND I HOPE THAT U WILL START UPDATEING THIS STORY EVERY WEEK!! IT JUST GETTING SO GOOD! ONCE A MONTH IS WAY TO HARD.I AM ALL FOR THE ONCE A WEEK THING...LOL I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW HE WILL REACT TO DRACO AND EVERYTHING! THIS IS GOING TO BE REALLY GOOD! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

TINA

I'm rather interested, please update as soon as you can.
I understand that it might take awhile, but it doesnt stop me from asking ^^.
Ja
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Shikai
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...Anything that sounds mean here is constructive critisism, which, i hope you appreciate rather than loathe, me for...

First of all, you could probably do with a beta - they're great for catching the mistakes we miss...

Second of all - I think you need to make it a little clearer when Harry switches between realities - I've found myself really trying hard to understand what was going on in the chapter - it's a great idea, just needs the edges polished off a bit is all.

You've got the -planning- down - I think it's just your -execution- you need to work on a little - anything that I, personally, think should be fixed is amazingly minor, and it won't take long - but it will make your fic a lot better and a lot easier to read...

Good luck, and I'm looking forward to the update! :)