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Reviews for: The Popcorn Business
Fermata 12/9/04 . chapter 1
I loved this. I think Kramerica is a real idea from a real Seinfeld episode, am I right? I may be wrong, tho. It's pretty funny. You gotta continue with this.
gnatbuzz21 11/20/04 . chapter 1
this will be a short review b/c now i have to go make some microwave popcorn. This is really funny! and if you made up the name "kramerica", that is really clever. (or is it from a sienfeld episode i didnt see?)
UnPhiltered 10/18/04 . chapter 1
I think you've got a great initial concept. It's been a while since you posted your first chapter. I'd like to see you develop this story line more. For example, what is the secret ingredient in Kramer and Newman's butter?
Melissa1987 3/18/04 . chapter 1
I liked that. It was good.
You need to post another chapter though.
evilgummibear 3/17/04 . chapter 1
Good so far, I'm excited for the next chaptor. Just to tell you: people read these stories and don't review, so there are a lot more people reading these than you think. So keep on writing!
kycool 3/16/04 . chapter 1
Um...is that it? It just seemed to end really quickly. And no, you won't get any flames for doing one this way. Seinfeld readers such as myself are so happy someone added another fanfiction that we don't care how you did it. You'll probably only get the average of three reviews for this story if you don't add another chapter. Then you can maybe get five reviews. It's sad, but that's what happens to shows that haven't been on for six years. Seinfeld is still extremely popular though, I can't believe we don't get more fanfictions. Anyway, my point is that you should add another chapter because it really ends too quickly. Other than that, it seemed like a great opening. Just remember: Everyone needs their own plot!
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