Touching. It's rare to see fanfics like this for Winry. It was very well written too. So short, yet very insightful.

"It was not as much listening to what they were saying, but rather more just trying to take those loose clouds of sound and pack them into tight little quivering spheres of light and life, to cram them into her heart as much as it could hold."

Lol, I actually tear up during all this, especially when I read that line above. Thanks. ;) Your imagery is simply wonderful. Great job!

Oh, so gorgeous, it makes me cry to read it. Why have I not found this story before?

Thanks so much for posting it.

wonderfuul! truly great job here!

As much as I hate to write reviews and not give critisism as well, this time I must. I think you really subtlies of Winry emotions and thought processes. The mood was consistant through out and I thought it was nicely poinient without going overboard. The ending was very good too.

Very nice. ^__^

nice story!

Sweet. Heartwarming. I’m probably not in the correct state of mind to enjoy this, because normally I appreciate description and imagery, but it was just boring here, almost pointless. *whaps self* I must _really_ be out of it, *lol*.
I liked the last paragraph the most. Gave me the warm fuzzies. Good job.