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| Nathan 2007-11-11 ch 20, anon. | abuseSorry about the double posting, had a net error that caused it. I may have posted from the first chapter but I was refering to the last, anyway sorry about that. |
| Nathan 2007-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseA nice story, I found only one thing in it that I didn't like. Why did you do that to Ursula?!?!?!?!? |
| Nathan 2007-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseA nice story, I found only one thing in it that I didn't like. Why did you do that to Ursula?!?!?!?!? |
| Raven 2007-01-29 ch 20, anon. | abuseOMG! I love it! It's so darn good! The end is totally sweet ( I mean like 'aw aren't they a cute couple' sweet.) Keep on writing and maybe the Dragon will come... |
| KuramaKitsuneRyu 2006-09-05 ch 5,  | abuseGood chapter! |
| KuramaKitsuneRyu 2006-09-05 ch 4, | abuseGood chapter! |
| KuramaKitsuneRyu 2006-09-05 ch 3, | abusegood chapter! |
| KuramaKitsuneRyu 2006-09-05 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter! |
| KuramaKitsuneRyu 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuseWEll that was strange... anyway god chapter! |
| GuyverZero 2006-03-14 ch 20, | abusethat was a very good story i enjoyed it very much.hope u contiue 2 write storys just as good. good luck. |
| Deltadasher 2005-04-09 ch 20, | abuseThat was really good! i only just finished reading it, bbut it was really good! |
| Himig 2004-12-28 ch 20, | abuseI love the first part. When the first time Ryu and Nina came to our world but it got UGLIER later on. The jokes went to far and Dawn? Is she human? And Ryu isn't that mean. If you watch the intro carefully he's pretty much kind and inerested around the world although it made me laugh about Ryu being literal Ryu IS too literal after all but I agree that HE IS a quiet person and quite mean but he's actually very concern And Cray? What happen to him? Never mind. Now edit you summary and tell people 'WARNING: OOC' Yep, you shouldda been more serious. The firt part between 1-12 was good. Humor in serious which really send me crying of Tears of Joy but it go lame o especially that tap dancing I expect Fou-lu fighting back you know and some violence. I expected more at that part but the ending was fine |
| Himig 2004-12-28 ch 13, | abuseI didn't like the tap dancing part. You shouldda warn about OOC -_- I thought this fic is good but your lame jokes went too far. Anyway, I'll continue reading *THIS IS A FLAME!* |
| airess 2004-10-11 ch 20, anon. | abuseAh, a nice ending to a nice fanfic. LOL Deis's tricks are really funny. Hope to read more of your stuff soon ^_^ |
| Airess Byrd 2004-09-29 ch 19, anon. | abuseAwe. This was a sweet chapter. Your song was really pretty. Can't wait to read the next chapter ^_^ |