Sara Jaye 2005-06-08 . chapter 1...Wow. I don't know how I ever missed this one. For such a simple-looking man, Dart is such a complex and interesting character. Good job. VERY good job. |
Inferno-Hero 2004-04-20 . chapter 1also ANOTHER GOOD STORY! -_-; my stories haven't been as good as they sometimes would because of just different pressures in my life right now? ANYWAY hope for a squel here also ^_^ |
hyliansage 2004-03-18 . chapter 1 Too lazy to login... -_- Anyway... yay! Another great ficcy by you! Hehe... i liked this um... interpretation of what happened to Dart. *grins* Can't wait for more ficcys! Write more soon! |
Samurai101 2004-03-17 . chapter 1 Col. This is very well written you now, and very insitive. ^.^ I like it alot. |
Cathy Barton 2004-03-17 . chapter 1Wow...I loved the imagery...I felt like I was at sea with Dart, as corny as that must sound. Very cool! Ohis is definately one of the better fics in this section! |
gentleness28 2004-03-17 . chapter 1The secret is revealed! You're so good at describing! Most of my characters just blab...oh well. When I was searching on the Internet, I found this website where it described the Fire Emblem characters and a little bit of their past. It said that Dan abandoned the plan and Wil, rather than go home in disgrace, wandered until he ended up with Lyn's group. Hm...I don't know. All I do know is that I loved you story! Keep Writing! |
Angel of Fate1 2004-03-16 . chapter 1AAh... Lovely as usual! One of those to inspire me to write better as a writer. So this was when Dan lost his memories, eh? Meep... And now, he is called "Dart" as he should be! Kept his character as well as Wil's. So, I see that this a sequel to "Wildflower of Pherae". Am I right? It seems to be a continuation... Anyway, great one-shot to go along with your last! Adding it to my favorite stories again! ^.^ |