aw... that was sweet... simple and short really are much better than trying to explain somehting that our mere mortal minds would not be able to understand.

I love this, so can't wait to read the sequel

Woah. Nice. I look forward to reading your other stories. Keep it up!

Beatiful!

really good

I read "Immortal Destiny" beofre reading this and its taken me from curiosity and impatience to a rather bittersweet mood. Don't sell yourself short this my not be "Immortal Destiny" but its still a moving piece.

Love the fic, going to read the sequal. Havn't herd of anyone giving eternal youth to Will before. They always have him age before he stops ageing. Ha ha. Liked the idea though, makes sense.