Whoa. Really enjoyed this. I love how her plan shocks Jareth and makes him rethink his script. Don't love how the "Hoggle" issue wasn't resolved. Can she, once he changes her, see her friends without killing them? Probably so. I hope so because I can see them grooving on being heroes for all the people who wish things away.

Good story and well written.

I find your fic to have given a significant contribution to Labyrinth fandom and have added it to my archive, Labyrinth Classics.

If you have any suggestions for fics that are not on the list but you consider to be Labyrinth classics give me a ring.

Personal note:

What made your fic stand out to me was you looked at a Jareth who was indifferent to Sarah. Other fics have done it before, but I think your fic is one of, if not the best fic that examines this aspect of their relationship.

this was made of awesome.

It's really very sad and also a tad bit annoying that Sarah had lost all her childish innocence.

I just wanted to say I really liked your story. I got a little concerned when Jareth dumped Sarah back into her world sans Toby but overflowing with guilt. Sarah's drive is really something to admire in this story. I have to say though that I love picturing her as "the Good Fairy of the Labyrinth." It would be interesting to observe their interactions when a new gaunlet runner is in attendence. Of course, Sarah doesn't actually have to make an appearance until after Jareth makes his dramatic departure. Anyway, back to my point, I liked the story. I loved reading this.

Fun read! I'm a little bummed that she never sees Toby again--I liked his characterization--but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Thanks for writing and sharing.

For some reason, reading this made me oddly sad. You said it had happy ending, though, so I guess it's just me.
It was definitely a fun and interesting read. I've never read a Laby fic that was written this way before, so I appreciated the originality of the style.
Thanks for this!

Ah, that's how she forgot.
...you love Didymus? And you did THAT to him? I'd hate to see how you handle your enemies! :D

Ach, Sarah's so stupid. Jareth TOLD her that her pragmatism would have a bad effect on the Labyrinth. Why doesn't she listen? If I could remember, why couldn't she??

This story was amazing! If I were you I'd be very proud of it. I'll admit, the begining I didn't like so much. In fact, I hated the prospect of Sarah growing up and destroying the Labyrinth so much, that I nearly stopped reading. But, nothing is what it seems, right? So I stuck it out and was very much surprized, impressed, and overjoyed with the plesant outcome. It was like a roller-coaster! It had about a million ups and downs whereas most other stories have only one. You had me crying almost from the begining and it didn't stop untill Sarah said she didn't want to leave the Labyrinth. Even after that when Jareth was going to send her back I started a little again. Wonderful work, I wish you luck in the future for others as good as this!

I'm floored. This was by far, one of the BEST Labyrinth fanfics I have EVER read. You are an amazing writer.

god i love this story so much! and i love you for writting it! it was fun and witty and sweet and everything. Really dig the ending too, loved the A/Ns. Can't help wondering what happend to old Hoggle though, kinda doubt Jareth was too merciful. sigh. Oh and i can just imagine Sarah and Jareth at work, poor Labyrinth contenders... never knew what hit them when they saw the Fairy God Mother making out with the Evil King... wicked. Anyway i just wanted to leave an apreciation note/review and a fav for the story. toodles

wow. that was a really good story. normally i say at least a little more, but the only thing i can say is 'wow'. later

Amazing writing, original story, and one hell of an ending. Fantastic. I applaud.

I liked the story but I can tell you that the Sarah in this story was really most of the time a real pain in the **. I honestly wanted to slap her. Poor Jareth I would understood him if he would have sent her to oubliette; she would have deserve it!
Still I did enjoyed reading the story.