 sasunaruhugznkisses 2009-12-11 . chapter 1i think i understand but if im wrong could u please correct me? okay i think um, naruto was the new hokage and he loved his people but half didnt want him as the leader but naruto still loved them well i guess naruto took a sacrifice?...of like himself? he got hurt i guess and now the village knows he really cares about his people cuz i think naru sacrificed like himself for his people or something well now hes guarded and like still injured and sasuke is always there with him(aww how cuteXD) and then his face is being put on the hokage monument? well i hope thats at least semi-right haha i really liked this story(even though i barely understand it XD) haha and ur way of writing is so unique u may be oblivious to the fact but ur readers see it. this story was good i think im going to go read some more of ur stories now ;) |
 SkywardShadow 2009-09-02 . chapter 1That was well done. I like that it's in a future kid's POV. Nice work. ^^ |
 disillusioned realist 2008-03-20 . chapter 1cool, I like it...though is Sasuke 'the sacrifice' as in his shadow/Ghost is watching Naruto or, who is it?
well, graet piece of work anyway.-
Keep it up and c you around-.-
Ghost |
 Lady Maiya 2006-10-09 . chapter 1It's about time to put him there! ^_^ |
 issues09 2006-07-22 . chapter 1Great JOb, It's good |
 Ms Trick 2006-04-10 . chapter 1This is a neato perspective. ^^ Loved it! |
 IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2006-02-16 . chapter 1oh that was really sweet |
 rry 2005-10-18 . chapter 1i like it!^^ but whob was norrorating it? nevermind, i still like even though i want to know that. and the ending was a little abrupt...but not so much you would need to change it^^ |
 Great Homicidal Walrus Fairy 2005-07-18 . chapter 1I think that that was a lovely ending. ^^ In fact, the whole story was lovely. Especially the SasuNaru hints...I'm officially obsessed. It's kinda creepy. |
 Ly 2004-07-26 . chapter 1 I don't like Sasuke :( Why him?! |
 bunny47 2004-04-26 . chapter 1I have to admit I am a little confused about events and such that were told... maybe a second chapter involving Naruto as the Hokage and Sasuke always watching - more needs to be explained on that and the reasoning behind what happened for him to be guarded in the first palce, at first I thought Naruto had died or something O_o Is the kid someone we know or a child of someone we know? I think it would be cool if you did at least one more chapter to this story ^_^ Or made this a story! With this being like a prolouge :P |
 J.Garibaldi 2004-03-17 . chapter 1Tsk. I think you diss your work too much. Personally, I really think this fic kicked **, and I'm usually pretty picky and not one to leave reviews. In fact, I think it would be really incredibly cool if you continue this. |
 drace-hunter 2004-03-17 . chapter 1YES! this must have more! *crys* i wanna know what happened to Naruto! ^^ great story by the way! lovely writing, and good working of another persons' view point! ...but who is the kid? ... not that it really matters but i'm kinda thinking it would be someone we'd know... whatever! i dunno... anyways... JA! and keep up the great writing! ^~ |
 Tunazap 2004-03-17 . chapter 1Nah it was perfect! |