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weiRd
2004-10-27 . chapter 5
well. hm.. yea. wads she gonna do after shes out in the world alone? well. her parents didnt wan her? tts weird. really no one wif her? not even one fren? wow. how to get a life like tt?
weiRd
2004-10-27 . chapter 4
erh. huh? okok i get a bit of idea tt they r tryin to laugh at granger i suppose?
weiRd
2004-10-27 . chapter 3
well.. lets see. somethin muz haf happen tt they r treatin her like tt huh? well.. strange to say.. but i understand this cht better den the previous one bout Malfoy. yupps. but hows she gonna cope wif these stress-es?
weiRd
2004-10-27 . chapter 2
erh. how to say.. not very good wif poem n stuff like tt? cant really give much feedback
cunfuzeddazzled257
2004-09-24 . chapter 5
ITS REALLY GOOD I LOVE IT ONE MORE THING...UPDATE OFTEN!
S.N. Blade
2004-08-02 . chapter 5
Quite interesting. I wonder what she did? As for the Draco/Malfoy differences, I really felt that, because it was something akin to me and still is. I love it.
PinkTribeChick
2004-06-19 . chapter 5
Wonderful story, and wonderful new chapter! One suggestion - back off using lyrics so much in the chapters. They should enhance the chapter - not carry it completely. Your own words and the story itself should carry the chapter - would be nice to see more of that.
Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
xoKiera
2004-06-19 . chapter 5
Very nice story. Please continue!
jOy
2004-06-16 . chapter 5
wowwee!nice!muz update soon!im hooked!
jOy
2004-06-16 . chapter 5
wowwee!nice!muz update soon!im hooked!
Rial
2004-06-14 . chapter 5
I take it you like Linkin Park? That's cool, that's my favorite band. Plz update very soon, I really want to know what happens. So far, it's really good.
quiet-mg
2004-06-14 . chapter 5
Aww, you just have to feel really bad for Hermione in this chapter, how could things have gone so wrong all of a sudden...I wonder what she did that had her parents kick her out...I mean, its Hermione, could the mistake have been that big. Well, I hope things turn out better for her later on...
Oh, and I still love Linkin Park..and your story is really good, goes well with the songs so far.. continue with the great work, hope you update soon =P
mrs.shigwa.cobain
2004-06-14 . chapter 5
HEY! I'm glad you updated this instead of letting it just go like you said you might...

So, I guess I owe you one big long review, huh? Well, I did say it may not be coherent, or relevant... now i have to add 'spelled correctly' to that list because I'm not having a good typing day, it's my finger's fault. I cut it on glass the other day and it hurts, so my typing ability in inpaired. Yes, that's it.

So anyway, let's at least try to make this relevant, right? ok:

The song was cool. I used to REALLY like Linkin Park, then I REALLY didn't like them because all the preppy people started REALLY liking them, but now I kinda SORTA like them. It's a cool song nonetheless.

This chapter was inescapably sad (that word... was HUGE!) I mean, her friends stop talking to her, her parents had kicked her out? Wow.. depressing. Wanna get to the fun happy flirty Malfoy part yet. You teased me with the teaser. (That was the repetitive reduncy allowance for this review...)

Besides being possibly the most depressing thing I've read in months, it was so beautiful. SO beautiful.

What else can I say that won't end up making me sound high... yep, I knew it, I'm done. Update any one of your stories at any time you please... preferably soon.
Pure Sunshine
2004-06-14 . chapter 5
Wow.

How TRULY beautiful. I couldn't write like that if I tried!

Poor Hermione! You never would have thought her parents to do that, or Ron and Harry to desert her. It's brill, though.

Definetly going on Author Alerts.
Little Eirtae
2004-06-14 . chapter 5
Aww! How sad! ;_;

I'm sorry you aren't getting more reviews for this. It's really good. You'd probably get more if the chapters were longer, though. They don't have a lot of action in them, and they tend to get a tiny bit repetitive. They're not actually short, it's just that most of the chapter is lyrics to a song.

Don't get me wrong, I love songfics, and I love this story. I also understand that this story isn't high on your priorities list at the moment. It would get a lot more recognition, though, if you'd insert some action and explain things a bit better.

Update soon! :D
~+~ Little Eirtae ~+~
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