Well crafted, most of it doesn't move too fast. Would have liked the coming out scenes to be a little more fleshed out, but other than that, great job. Especially liked "I don't want her to ever see this." Great job! Write more!

nice job!

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks so much!

You did a really great job. I enjoyed it very much.

All I can say is WOW. That story had me on the edge of my seat. Way to go.

good job!thanks for posting it

Great story!