sorry for the wait. Had to re-read the whole thing before I even thought of tackling chapter 5. Lovely job, really enjoyed the update. The idea of putting Makoto/Ami storyline with Mina/Rei is brilliant. We get to enjoy some progress while Mina and Rei figure few things out. The flashbacks were a bit lengthy but none the less great chapter. I hope you'll update a bit sooner this time;)
Keep it up!

They are all messed up love wise, aren't they? Poor girls...

yei! update!

Really really nice. Great job. I'm loving your story! Keep up the good work and update soon . . .


^_^ see ya

Great chapter. The part with Ami was good. I feel you got her personality well.

This is outstanding. It has a darker, deeper aura than most stories her but it also has some humor. It works really well together. Please Update soon.

So far, a really good story.
One point though that you might want to change: you used the word decadence in reference to the cake. It's a deceiving term, it sounds all posh and fancy, but it is really a term used to indicate a certain style of decay, as in lifestyle, art or literature, so be carefull with that one. Keep up the good work though

nice story! keep it up!

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I really enjoy what you've written! The multiple conflicts in each and every relationship... It's amazing.

Update soon, okay?

Cool

TO be completely honest, I did have to reread the story. Had no idea where it left off or where it was going. But did I enjoy doing that! Awesome story, I really love it that you give it a sense of reality, and actual growth in characters. I really like it how you address each character. And how much in character they seem to be. Hope you'll update a bit sooner this time. Can't wait.

I'm impressed with this. I like where it's going. Please continue.

Well done! I like this story and I think that I have read it before, but I do not recall reivewing it. Well, anyway, if I did you have two praising reviews. This is a good story and well worth reading. I like the story line and think that you should continue it soon!

Thank You!

Incredible story. I really liked the insight into Rei's thoughts and her past. This story is very well done, I hope you update.

Wow, I truly hope you update on this. Rei's past was nicely done, and Kotono is interesting as well. I really want to see what happens between Rei and Usagi and Minako. Great story so far!