Oh! It's a trilogy!! ^^ I'M SO HAPPY!

It was so good! I loved Amelia's mom, expectedly, and am also a very large fan of Bob.

I also find it a great idea that you have the Brau Demon used in Zel's transformation having been a "companion" to Amelia's mother. It links everything somehow, and just sort of screams that Zel and Amelia are fated to have met and be together.

So wonderful... I'm so glad someone finally decided to do something about the incident when Phibrizzo. I mean, come *on*, Amelia *died* in Zel's arms! If that's not cause for some definite introspective romance, then, well, the world deserves to be Giga Slaved.

Onward, to the next part! (hopefully, it's up...)

You're brilliant, by the way. Just so you know. ^^

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.

Loved it. But i must simply ask a Gourry worhty question. Whats with the name Veathrad-whutchyamacallit.

Ups...my mistake. It's Slayers NEXT, right? See how I'm new in the fandom? n_nu.
One last question: were are the chapters names from? They sound familiar, but I'm not certain about them...
See ya!

Hi! I'm new in this fandom, and I'm just starting to check fics for this wonderful series. I saw yours in the first page of Slayers fics, and I decided to give it a try. I have to say I loved your fic, really. The idea of the Limbo was great, and I liked to see Zolf and Rodimus...I don't know why, but I suppose they don't appear too much often in fics. It was a good detail, since Zel let us know he promised to see them again when they died.
Also, I liked the way the second characters managed to guided Amelia and Zel not only to the extit, but to guide them to things they have never think of too much. Amelia's mom was really funny, and in a way scary XD.
In the end they don't remember anything...that's good, because that way fits with the end of TRY, I think.
By the way, I laughed really hard in the scene Amelia finds Zel *blushes* I don't want to sound pervert, but I tried to imagine it and... *blushes again*, well it was funny indeed. n//_//n
I want to read the two other parts you're writing. I want to know what else happens!
I haven't read to many Slayers fics, but yours is one of my favorites already, thank you very much for letting us read it!
Well, good luck, and hope to read about you soon!
Bye!

Are you saying two more chapters to this fic, or two more sequels? The Narrator is confused. either way, excellent job - and yes, I have been checking regularly to see if you updated!

Salute!
The Narrator

Aww...short chapter, but I guess that wrapped things out satisfactorily, having everyone think "something" did happen but not knowing exactly what.

Looking forward to any new stories you write!

It was a very enjoyable fic ^_^ The epilogue was rather . . . short *pokes it* But that just makes me look forward to future installments all the more!

Yay! I'm glad that you were able to finish this. This story was certainly a good read, and I can't wait to read any future stories you write. ^_^

I didn't even catch this online last night, but it was a nice surprise before work. ^_- This causes more suspense than a sense of closer though, so you can bet I'll be looking forward to the next part!

Bravo!! This is so good! I love how it was Zolf and Rodimus who were the ones to give him the facts! Plus, it was really cute to see Amelia interact with a naked Zel baring his soul to her. That was beautiful! And then he held her hand *sigh*. Loved the hint about the bracelets it just ties try in so well!
Anyways, loved this fic!

I TRIED leaving a review a couple of days agao, but my comnputer was being b-... not nice, so I'll leave one now. Loved it, loved it, can't wait for the epilouge!
Salute!
The Narrator

*SIGH*
Okay, that was very happy, and I can't stop grinning now. ~_^
I love the explanation of Amelia's talismans, and I can see where it's leading (I like these little hints at the future happenings - such as Ame giving Zel the bracelet at the end of Try.) *BIG grin*
Amelia sharing such an important part of her life and inner 'angst' with Zel was great since it actually made him think about someone other than himself. He finally realizes what we've all known all along. Amelia understands personal tragedy and betrayal better than most and is more similar to him than he had thought. This new knowledge makes him wonder about the way he's handled his life. "...You've been slowly killing yourself, all this while..." Sad, but true. But HE was the one who took HER hand... *sighs contentedly*
I really thought that the other characters' reactions to each other was perfect. Gourry sleeping until it was time, and then stepping forward without hesitation to return to Lina. Zangulus lounging and waiting, and shooting off snide comments about Zel and Amelia's whereabouts and their activities (heh heh heh...). Sylphiel innocently trying to cover herself and then following Gourry without comment. Martina eyeing the men unabashedly, and stepping into the circle with Zangy. And finally, Zel, ever embarassed, but still seeing the events with a clinical eye. He figured out what the strands of light meant (and that he and Amelia shared the strongest bond - Yay! ^_^)
I have to say, that it has been a real pleasure to read this story, and I am very glad that you have an epilogue to finish it off (I also look forward to your Opinions, too ^_^). But then again, if you ever get the urge to add to this world or continue the story (hint hint), I would have no complaints. ~_^ Bravo! and until next time!

The ending was beautiful. I liked the bit where Zel realizes his bond with Amelia is the strongest. Oh yes, I DID know the red threads were gonna lead them to each other, but what I meant was that I wanted to see what would happen when they got to the end...seeing that they were naked and stuff...hee hee...

Hey, looks like Zelgadis had some happy feel good thoughts after all! Amelia must be rubbing off on him... ^_- I thought your description of the threads worked just fine, considering when one tugged, the other could feel it. (Made sense to me, anyway.) A sidestory might be good, but don't worry about it if you aren't inspired by the idea. (It's fairly easy to think of what things the others might encounter.) Now on to the epilogue, where we hope to see them retain some of the insight they gained while away! (Hope being the key word.) ^_- This has been a joy to read.

A very nice chapter. I've really been enjoying this story, but *sigh* all good things must come to an end. Great work!