This is a strong story here, it really captures how Stephen King first wrote Secret Window. It is an imaginative write.

Hey! I loved the chapter, especially the "Quietly growling, she succumbed to the will of the Paper Clip." Don't ya just hate the Paper Clip? I noticed two mistakes though:
Irresputeable is not a word; it should be either indisputable or irrefutable.
The expression is actually "few and far between" rather than "far and few between."
Those were easy mistakes to make, and I've probably made several similar on a daily basis. I just thought I'd let you know so that you could fix them...or tell me to kiss your ** or something lol. I really loved it though!

Damm straight.Great story,you should be proud of yourself.

Oh wow,now this was REAL good.Your best chapter yet.Truely brilliant.And I don't know why,but the line "and yes, there was the Redi-Whip pressure-can, lying discarded under the stove." had me cracking up,odd I know but that's me for ya.

Oh dear,murder murder everywhere.I like Lily though,hope she don't get axed next.And the kitty,like him.But no,what's with the cliffhanger!

Hm,nice twist of events.I like .

Oh,they fooled the devil.Kuddos for them,or her I should say.And glad to hear they got married!And now that's my idea of a honeymoon.But no,not a cliffhanger!

Ohh,hell she sent chills down my spine.Evil ** ain't she,I love it.

Woo hoo!The devil is back.I find myself liking her more and more.Don't know why exactly.Great job.

Oh dear,now isn't that something.I'm a bit happy about it though,Glenn was an total **.I'm the type who likes to see people pay for there wrong doings.Which is exactly why I love the ending to Secret Window.Great chapter,Mort and Danny are so cute together.

Creepy creepy creepy! and awesome. Keep up the good work!

Very intriguing so far. Looking forward to more.

Oh good, so this is going to be a story.Glad to hear that.And like the start of the plotline as well.And I just gotta say that Danny reminds me of me.I could get 9 hours of sleep and still can't get up in the morning.Nice job.

Hm,eerie.I like it.Very well written.If it's a one shot type thing then it's amazing as it is.But if it's the start of a story,you could do some even more amazing things with this I'm sure.

Wow! Selling his soul - this is an awesome take on everything! I hope that you have some more in mind! This reminded me of "The 9th Gate" a little - the devil/and or minion portrayed as a woman. Love it! Read my SW fic if you get the chance :-).