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Archer Ri-chan
2008-09-24 . chapter 1
Hey there, Opaaru! How ya doin'? I promised (not in words, actually- but... STILL!) that I was going to review every single one of your fanfics, so I am! I must say, this is an AWESOME fic! I like it a lot, but I think that your best writing so far lies with Tenrai no Yugi. Keep working on it and you'll be a professional writer! My offer for help with fanfics is always open, and for anyone too! If you can, I would appreciate it if you could recommend me! I'm always glad to help with a fanfic, as long as I know and have read at least part of the anime it's based on!! Please, ask me anything!
Warrior-of-the-Flames
2008-07-09 . chapter 5
I lurved reading this story and hope to hear/ read (he he its about 1 in the morning.. i'm not thinking so well...) more soon!
I think i'll go grab a coke soon...
~Shadow Wolf
ps. WRITE MORE SOON!
Bmangaka
2007-11-02 . chapter 5
Cool story! Write more please! Are the girls gonna get with their teachers? That could be an interesting story line, lol.
Rain Melody
2007-06-14 . chapter 5
that was amazing!! i love hate seiryu. he remings me of nagako almost. but not really. i almost forgot how much i luved reading your fics. i skipped the review for chap 4 to get straight to this one. Sorry i haven't reviewed in so long but i go busy with school and could only now start tracking down all my fan fics. i don't know if you've updated gin aki so i'll check that out next. i feel so bad for tsuki but she is incredible to have kept up with it. i think she'll show seiryu just who's boss. and she's doing it all for suzaku and his seishi!! she has a heart of gold to put up with seiryu for them. and no doubt she'll be almighty powerful. i can't wait to see whats next cause it sounds like they're about to meet the seishi sometime soon. that should be interesting. of course it will be you're writing it!! give thanks to your muses for making you write this tell them to make you write again quick update soon!! i'll be waiting!!
Bishiglomper
2007-02-25 . chapter 1
Ne, Opa! Update? Surely you can spare bits of time away from Tenrai.. as awful as that sounds. XD Pleaase?
Rain Melody
2007-01-07 . chapter 3
yay you're fighting back...with flame throwers!! poor selene. i want to know what else seiryu has in store for her. an if they are back six years from miaka's time, are they by any chance going to meet the seishi pre miaka six years? but then they would all be children...well most. an wow ezra outsmarted genbu!! kinda... and so that is how chess was introduced to our lives!! how could you!! go back in time and introduce chess to the gods? not that i have anything against it, it can be fun. "I believe the word I used was ‘pudgy’". i really liked that line for some reason. i could just imagine him saying that an...well it cracked me up. i love their conversations. "They make you look foreign" that cracked me up too. haha. please update soon!! this is very intersting!!
Rain Melody
2007-01-07 . chapter 2
i think you should stop beating up the author otherwise she might not be able to update. but then i would have to start beating her up... great story!! i like that it's so long. gives me more to read!! and i like her style of writing. very professional-like. hehe sorry couldn't think up right word. i'm very unprofessional-like. but i think the people-kami match up was good. they seemed to fit. or whatever is in my head right now that i can't exactly put into words.
Rain Melody
2007-01-07 . chapter 1
sorry for ot but this is interesting and i want ot to finish it. ^.^
Noxen
2006-07-06 . chapter 5
Yay! I like this fic!! My sis, her name on her is Dark Priestess Kodachi, told me you were god!
jen
2006-06-26 . chapter 5
Sorry, but this review is going to be short: I love your story. I really fo think the others deserve their chance at happiness and its nice of you to write one such story. I really am enjoying it. Great job.
inuphantom13
2006-04-11 . chapter 5
Great story (personally I like Gin Aki better, but this is okay too) But c'mon Opa-san, update once in a while! TT_TT
Ou Yang Jing
2006-03-20 . chapter 5
OMG. LOL. I LUFF you! I always thought that dragon needed a good kick in the nose. Great chapter. For a while I think many of us thought that you had dropped off the planet. I was like 'OMFG! O.T. UPDATED!!' Glad to see you back. LOL
Owen D.
2006-03-19 . chapter 5
I really like your story, the plot is original and the characters are funny, keep up the good work!
Mordant-Lore
2006-03-18 . chapter 5
Whoah, long time no see! I must say, I certainly wasn't expecting this story to update (I actually skimmed by the title three days in a row before I recognized it), but I'm so glad it did! Glad to see Seiryu finally got what was coming to him, though I am interested to see where this thing with Tsuki is going. They do make an interesting team, Seiryu and Tsuki, as strange as it seems right now. Well, hopefully you'll update a little sooner than last time, lol, but if not I suppose I'll just have to suffer in silent expectation for your next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Ryochan8
2006-03-18 . chapter 5
AHA! Update! ^-^ Just out of curiosity, will Tsuki have a Chichiri obsession, since she "failed to protect him" ? -Or avoid him out of shame? Still even though it took awhile, the chapter was worth it. Hopefully the next one will come a bit sooner? *hint hint*
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