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| Sorrow's song 2008-06-03 ch 15,  | abusegreat story, wonderful progression of action and the most adoring ending!! excellent job! |
| sam 2008-03-01 ch 15, anon. | abusehm...interesting ending with Rin and Shippou and there was a bit of lemon in the story but all in all, i liked it a lot!! continue writing more stories!! |
| sam 2008-02-29 ch 8, anon. | abuseoh...the last 3 lines add tons of suspense...i love it!! |
| akira342 2008-01-05 ch 15, | abuseAwesome plot! |
| Anonia 2007-11-19 ch 15, anon. | abuse"I can't think of any reason why I would be having these hallucinations." Brilliant. This was an interesting fic (and it painted Naraku in a new light for me even if I did shudder a bit at first). This was nicely put together and I think I'll save it just in case I want to read it again later. I do kind of feel sorry for Kouga. His soul mate got snatched right out from under him (now what did the Fate's faces look like when they noticed *that* little mishap? I can only smile as I imagine the chaos. I must thank you for providing me with such an interesting image). You do work my dear! -Anonia |
| sesshyluver17 2007-10-14 ch 15, | abuseMY KAMI! SO ENDEARING! I was totally enthralled with this story. I could not leave my chair until I finished it. It's so sweet yet with a bitterness chimed in. I adore it. I was kind of sad on the 14th chapter due to Kouga and Naraku's sad ending, but boy did the last chapter make up for it. I love how you left the entire story out of the demon lord Sesshoumaru and the miko Kagome. It keeps me wondering and my imagination is reeling! You have no idea how much I enjoyed this story. lol I can't wait to check out some more of your works^^ |
| Dragonluvr1993 2007-10-02 ch 15, | abuseI love this story! It was so sweet and everything...MAKE MORE! ...Okay, sugar rush over! Anyways, I love it! Ja ne! =^w^= |
| Inuhanyou21 2007-07-21 ch 15, | abuseQuite good! I really enjoyed this story! |
| Seishi Sairensuno 2007-05-12 ch 15, | abuseAbsolutely amazing. This story had me on the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading it! Gah, incredible job! Sei |
| Lady Empress 2007-04-10 ch 15, anon. | abusei loved this story! it was so well written. The only thing that I would suggest, that along with your great story telling;), you could put in some more suspense in your future stories, along with some heated romance. Make the characters sweat a little. you have a great way of making the scenery come to life. you are a great writer. You just need a little depth and length to your stories. Other than that. I cannot put it down. |
| reveiwe 2007-03-31 ch 15, anon. | abusenaraku is so hot |
| asuka-2004 2006-10-25 ch 15, | abusehahaha that was an awsome story well done |
| sakabatou 2006-10-15 ch 15, anon. | abusei loved your story. it was really well written and i coudnt find myself to stop reading it!! :) |
| Flame Dancer077 2006-08-22 ch 15, | abuseWow. Just wow. This story was amazing I can't wait to read more of your works! I loved how you portraded Naraku :) you don't see him nice in very many stories! I loved every bit! |
| Granting Love445 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abusegret story. i love all of them |