This was so much like mort to me...

Great job.

I love how you really got into Mort's head and how he would feel after killing his wife. I remember seeing this movie ages ago but this realy is what I expect him to be like afterwards. Well done with this! You really are brillient at getting the characters right.

"There never has been, nor will there ever be such a thing as normal. Just different levels of sanity."

Ain't that the truth!

You've done an excellent job of capturing the character's thoughts here; it's been a while since I saw the film but Mort sounds very like himself here... Maybe all writers are slightly mad? : )

Great movie. Good ending. And now an even better ending. ;-) Two thumbs up.

Hey, Dawnie... It's eerie how easily you got that mode of thought down. I mean, I honestly believed I was reading a crazy person's thoughts... After all, I should know, if you take my meaning...

Wow, I love it.

You're such a great writer, Dawn! I'd love to see you writing a long story of 20 chapters or so. I'm sure it'd be great. As I don't remember much of what happens in the end of Secret garden, I'm a little confused when reading this. I do remember who the murderer is, but that's about it. I don't remember what happens to him or the other people. Too bad, though, that the dog had to die!
Anyway, it's well-written as always, but do you really think he would feel guilt? Personally, I think he wouldn't give it any thought, but maybe that's because I don't remember the ending!
Hope you're doing good!

Hugs,

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suspensful... I like it very much, it's better than my writing thats for sure, I liked the fact that you can tell when you switch to the next characeter, now thats good writing skills
alright thanks for the review!
~writerandartistandproud

wow, that was reli good..

Poor Mort. I feel so bad for him. This is a great story! Mort is perfectly in charecter! I will eventually write a Secret Window fic! Aside from that Matchbox 20 songfic... Keyword eventually I'm writting to many stories as it is...

Whoah. This really fits what I imagined he was thinking at the end when he was wearing the earphones. *blink* Good job! (the only reason I'm not giving you a standing ovation is because... well... it scares me!)

Oh,I likes! And it really wasn't his fault,it was SHOOTER'S!! EVIL!I really like it! Write more!

Hey, that was good! I liked the way you started it out, definately something Mort would say. I'd give it the thumbs up if you could see my thumbs!

Hi Dawnie, I read this a few days ago, and thought it was lovely, but was in a bit too much of a rush to review properly so I thought I'd wait.. lovely.. this was very good.. well done!

-Abbie

Woah... that was good! And kewl! (that prolly sounds kinda morbid from over on your side, doesn't it? lol) Thanks a lot for reviewing my fic, and i'm sorry I haven't updated in a while. Well, baibai!