 melanie g 2006-11-12 . chapter 5 I really liked the story. Kim Possible and A Christmas Carol are two of my favorite things and you combined them beautifly. |
 CastaS 2006-08-19 . chapter 5great story |
 cl 2005-09-03 . chapter 5 One more thing, you should try to get together with someone to make a version of your story with pictures and background music like on |
 cl 2005-09-03 . chapter 5 This should be shown on the screen with the name,"A Very Possible Christmas Carol." This reads like the classic Dickens version. I was surprised on your selection of characters to portray the Christmas ghosts, but they blended in nicely with your story. I thought Duff Killigan would have been better as the final ghost. All in all, good job done! I look forward to reading your story regularly during the Christmas seasons. |
 Crystal-One 2005-04-29 . chapter 1This is magnificent so far! I love the flow of the story and how it carries such a 'ye olde' feeling to it while still incorporating the modern day society. Brilliant!
Though, I must point out that 'doi' is spelled with a 'y', not an 'i'. I actually invented it to combat 'duh' about two years ago and it has recently appeared on TV (futurama, Kim Possible, and a few other shows have mysteriously taken hold of it) and on the internet (spelled incorrectly, I might add... >_>) But you know what? No one believes that I created it... NO ONE! *twitch* Hey, if yoo ever hear anyone use "your face" (or something close) as a comeback, feel free to freak out... I made that too.
*cough* Ah ha... heh, I'm ranting again, aren't I? Ahg, whenever I see it I just go on a rampage. Sorry about that. Oh, and lovely story! Unique, as always. |
 Go-Colts 2004-08-21 . chapter 5Wow...this is so touching. It's nowhere near Christmas and I'm already in the Christmas spirit. |
 Go-Colts 2004-08-20 . chapter 2Excellent story. |
 David Clark Allen 2004-08-10 . chapter 5In a nutshell? Won-der-ful!!
Writer, artist...you can do it all. |
 OnOn 2004-07-19 . chapter 5I can breath now. it's over. drakken is not dead- he's acartoon and kim is still a normal 15 year old who saves the world. it was a good story once i got past drakken's ghost. that just threw me for a loop. sorry if i flamed earilier. |
 OnOn 2004-07-19 . chapter 1Drakken is not dead! LALALALA Can't hear you! I just wanted to see who was Scrooge and now my head hurts! i don't wanna flame but true fans don't kill characters! Drakken and Shego are immortal in my eyes after all the good die young and the evil live forever! |
 the Desert Fox 2004-07-10 . chapter 5 Good story, really enjoyed it. Wade reading Midwiving for Dummies? Now that's a first.
Keep up the good work. Kim/Ron forever. |
 WolfBane2 2004-07-10 . chapter 5Well...eh, I guess it was ok. Except it was way too predictable and really kind of boring. But I'll be watching for your next fic. WolfBane2, out. |
 Cynthia Krenshaw 2004-06-04 . chapter 4Wow! Great story!! :) |
 Allaine 2004-06-03 . chapter 3I was worried that this story wouldn't be continued. I'm enjoying it very much, and I hope you will continue to give us a Middleton Xmas in spring. (All their parents are gone, and it wasn't Shego? _Very_ strange. Maybe they're living on the moon.) |
 WolfBane2 2004-05-31 . chapter 4Mm...I don't know. Stave 4 wasn't as...real, as the other 3 staves were. You talked with a lot of pretty talk and phrases, but they said nothing, there was no real meaning to them.
Aw...I was hoping the Future spirit would be Shego herself. Would've been ironic. Oh, but you did a good job getting the doomy feeling into the chapter.
And you didn't use the "Good riddance to bad rubbish" phrase. (sulks)
Anyway, get the last stave up ASAP! |