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hornedjolteon
2009-10-30 . chapter 6
Last updated in 2005, huh? I want to make sure that your corpse ain't rotting away somewhere AND that you didn't forget about this story if it isn't. Please, PLEASE continue it!
immiD
2008-04-06 . chapter 6
Heeloo :D pleas continue this great story! Loved it!
avatarjk137
2007-01-28 . chapter 6
Yes, more than 5 months IS a shameful update length.
Now that I'm done being a smartass, I have to say: you are an awesome writer. Jimperator, WatsonSword, I can see why they love your work so much. You really do know character development like the back of your hand. Me, I can do action and humor pretty well, but I'm not very good at the deep stuff, and I don't know the first thing about romance. You, on the other hand, YOU sir are quite the writer. Two freakishly large thumbs-up!
backupsystem
2006-09-23 . chapter 6
Aloha, cousin. So, now that formalities are done with, I've seen all six of the chapters this fic has so far, and, frankly, this seems like a good fic. However, you haven't updated in over a YEAR! Please update it soon, and keep yourself from being a liar. *hint: the A/N at the end of A Softer Heart*
chickens
2006-06-13 . chapter 6
Cool fic.Will 322 work his charms on Gantu as well
Mona
2005-09-02 . chapter 5
Sorry I haven't reviewed in such a long time. The scenes in this story were really touching. You've got a nice touch for 625.
DanMat6288
2005-04-28 . chapter 6
Heh. Dragon. I know what it's like to take virtually forever to write the next chapter of a story. I have SO MANY unfinished stories in my account! You know how long it is taking me to write MY story starring YOUR OE (spinoff of Original Character: Original Experiment).
Destiny Dreamer2
2005-04-23 . chapter 6
AW! So cute!

I love 625 fics!
WatsonSword
2005-04-23 . chapter 6
I'd say you handled 625 extraordinarilly well! Why else would I refer to this particular fic whenever I recommend something to show good psychology.
You have a certain knowhow that most other fic writers here lack. When they want to portray something about their characters, they typically spend too briefly a time on it. They don't drive the point home nearly enough. You on the other hand, with this story, don't seem to have a problem with shoving your point into the readers' faces of just how new and confusing this situation is to 625. Most others would do that far too subtly.
By the way, you did have a couple typos in this, though I'm not the one who should be saying that, since typo is my middle name.
Mimic12355
2005-04-22 . chapter 6
Very nice chapter, very well written. No prob about the delay, happens to me all the time. Keep up the good work.
Fishlover
2005-04-22 . chapter 6
Aw... that was so cute and sad. Please continue the story!
Loyal Lady Pisces
2005-04-22 . chapter 6
Aw isn't he a sweet little experiment? ^^" He's right about both Gantu and 625, they both have soft hearts that they hide for fear of being hurt. Maybe you sweet little cousin can teach them how to show thier true feelings and to love each other as I know they can. ;3 This as always was a beautifully written chapter, you are a master of characterization. Love you sweetheart! ^^"
Mareo and Anime
2005-04-22 . chapter 6
Naw, it's alright! (High five) It was worth the wait. ^_^ Y'know, you're starting to sound a lot like that experiment yourself(!) lol Cool.
WatsonSword
2005-03-08 . chapter 5
This is an incredible story! I think ts your best so far. I loved the way 625 reacted to eating his sanwich, just like an alchoholic getting his fix.
I first read this two months ago! Why haven't you updated?! It's really starting to piss me off that such a great story has just been sitting idly by for so long.
Deanna625
2005-02-24 . chapter 1
This story rocks!! You Da Dragon!
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