 beaple leone michaelmas 2010-01-02 . chapter 1hello! ::D
i just finished reading this story - and regen's first chap, too. i realize i'm a few years behind, but... anyway.
great sorry!! i love the twist - very very much!
i honestly didn't see that coming ::D
oh, and, if you don't mind my asking, are you filipino?
no offense, but some of the "sightings" mentioned here are urban legends in the philippines - found in true philippine ghost stories, etc. also, the incident with the *red* keyhole isn't very well know outside the place where it occurred...
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 Dovasery 2009-06-14 . chapter 4I just wanted to say that this is the most depressing story I have read, but its a good depressing (if thats possible). It was certainly strange but after the ending it makes sence. As much as I hate to see everyone die (Oishi!! poor Kikumaru) this was an extreamly satisfying story. I agree with some of the other reviewers, this would make an awesome Tenpuri movie, but I am glad this is only fanfiction.
However while the plot was simply outstanding, I will say that some parts really in some previous chapters, are a bit confusing and a little hard to fallow. I know horror is suposed to be like that but I think that a little more description would solve that problem. Description as in helping your readers be able to see it more in thier mind.
5 out of 5 stars. 1 of my top 5 faveorite stories.
Keep writeing.
~Dove |
 loove it!! 2009-04-16 . chapter 4 oh...my...god...
this is the best tragic story I've read for a while ;-;
great job! I'm really near tears now...hope you'll do more! ...as for next Halloween, I mean... |
 RyoSaku4ever 2009-04-14 . chapter 4OMG! That was umm... sad? You fooled me. And i thought that Tezuka was dead, it was the other way around. That was great :) But also sad :( keep up the good work
~Denise |
 RyoSaku4ever 2009-04-14 . chapter 2This is great! I know the one with the doctor, the patient and the elevator. That was downright creepy. Now I'm scared to even move from where I'm sitting.(I'm alone in my room plus I'm easily scared of anything that has to do with horror.(Grandma don't visit me, pls.)(note: my grandmother died 4 days ago) |
 Dragon Reverb 2008-11-23 . chapter 4wait.. is it done? |
 KuroNite 2008-08-03 . chapter 4wow...just wow...idky but i almost cried at the end... |
 brightandsunny 2008-03-24 . chapter 4Wow, a wonderful story, what a twist ending!! It reminds me of the movie, " The Others" ! I really enjoyed reading it, it's so sad, at first, I was really confused, but everything made sense in the end! |
 Aireeana 2008-03-20 . chapter 1This is totally cool! Awesome fic! But i'm glad its a fic because if it really happened... > |
 rianu 2008-03-07 . chapter 4Whoa.. That...was a totally sad ending for such a fun story.. (o.o)
But it was very well-written and so enjoyable! Everyone was in character even in their 'scared' moments.. Sengoku especially warmed my heart for his 'joke'! He's so crazy.. (-,o) I especially like the part where Oishi and Atobe was staring at the red eyes of the ghost.. It creeped me out too, and I was reading the fic in broad daylight! Hah! -ashamed- And also the plot twist towards the end.. That was just pure genuis..
Anyway! Thank you for writing such a cool (although so unbelievably sad) fic..
(-,-)v |
 firedragongirl 2007-04-22 . chapter 4 O.O OMG THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY! I SO THOUGHT TEZUKA WAS THE ONE THAT WAS DEAD OR THAT WAS LIKE, DYING AND STUFF! T.T I CAN'T BELIEVE ATOBE DIED! NU ATOBE! T.T I hope you update soon! It doesn't say that this is completed! Oh wowz... At least they have... er... friends that are dead together to keep each other company and stuff... but... omg... This is so sad... but such an awesome story... like omg... nu... ^.^ Please update soon! |
 Miss Selarne 2007-04-11 . chapter 4Wow. Very nice twist. But it's kinda sad how they all die in the end and they don't even notice it. So the convention center was some sort of limbo or something? I'm guessing yes, cause then Tezuka could be there if he was in a coma. |
 LastingDream 2007-02-18 . chapter 4I´m at a loss of words... I can´t say if I´m atonished or terrified... You kill Atobe! That makes me really sad :-( At the final I can even imagine when they find those three barely alive (with the fatal injuries and all) and finally only one survived. I´m shaking... Well job. Really needing something to chear me up. |
 Garowyn 2007-01-06 . chapter 4Oh, wow; a chill actually ran down my spine when I read this one. Nice job! Normally I don't read horror stories, but when I saw "no yaoi," I had to, since there's such a stifling amount of shonen ai in this section. Anyway, the ending was very unexpected. It was rather unfortunate that most of them died, but it makes for an excellent read. The part after Atobe said all he saw was red, and then the man saying the girl had red eyes...that was freaky! Fantastic writing. |
 merissala 2006-06-01 . chapter 4OMIGOSH OMIGOSH OMIGOSH! SUCH A GREAT STORY!! BUT SCARY! I LOVE THIS STORY!! PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER HALLOWEEN STORY! AH! I'M SO HAPPYY! I LOVE THIS STORY!! |