 lime 63 2007-05-14 . chapter 1I loved it, that was Soo cute! |
 Bookish0278 2007-01-28 . chapter 1I liked the last part the best. That seems like it would be in the book. I LOVED IT!
Bookish0278 |
 Krispykreme1468 2006-05-15 . chapter 1Cute. I'm a little dissappointed though. Probably because I expected it to be funnier. But you know, I love fluff too. Fluff is love. I loved the ending. Nice work. |
 Conny1908 2006-04-30 . chapter 1I'm glad that you let the story have a mind of its own because it's wonderful the way it is.
Great characterization, great lines, grammar and spelling correct - what a pleasure to read! And what a shame that you haven't received more reviews!
My favorite line: "Hermione tried to imagine the female student body fainting at the feet of Ron Weasley, and failed. He didn't exactly come across as heartthrob material. He was far too... solid, she supposed. Steady. Comfortable." |
 emmaliefje 2006-03-01 . chapter 1Great story. So cute. I liked it a lot, one of my favorite RHr stories. Keep up the good work! |
 purebristles 2006-01-17 . chapter 1"He briefly wondered if it were possible to die from abject fear and overwhelming hope, simultaneously." You've managed to capture that feeling in words completely accurately. Completely. |
 la rosa 2005-12-26 . chapter 1 This fic is great! Very adorable! |
 eugene-the-artichoke 2005-12-04 . chapter 1Fantastic. Lovely. Sweet. Wonderful. |
 jealous 2005-11-12 . chapter 1 too bad ron's the only wonderful guy out there. darn hermione and her dibs. |
 ffaddix 2005-02-18 . chapter 1I come back almost every week to re-read this story. One to just bask in the sheer sweetness of it, two to give me a picker upper if needed, and three to see if you've recieved any more reviews because a great story like this deserves hundreds of raving reviews. So today I came back to check on the review count, and was outraged to see not even one more (BLOODY WANKERS!). Then I re-read the fic, and went to see what I had written in my review. I wanted to make sure I had properly stated my undying love for this work of art, through means of a review, to find the most shocking revelation of 2005.
I HAVEN'T REVIEWED YET!
It was apalling to see, so I'm promised myself I'd write a lengthy review to make up for it. All I can do is profusely apologize,and say " I'm sorry". I was so sure I had reviewed this story.
I'm sorry.
However, I'm going to stop making execuses and actually, you know, review the story.
I'm sorry.
"Marvelous" was absolutely, positively, by-far one of the best one-shots I've ever read. This one really gets to you. I'm a big lover of all things Ron, and we RONfans are very used to how most authors don't recognize how "marvelous" he is. I'm so happy you did, and wrote it so well.
I always think about this one line...
"And yet every time, he still managed to have these moments where the absolute best part of him shone out for all the world to see"
That line is the greatest thing since sliced bread, and I love it so much! It really is SO true, and I appreciate that you included it in there.
An all-around great little story. Simply lovely.
-Tyn of ffaddix
( Once again I really, really, REALLY am very sorry for not reviewing earlier) |
 RosieLemondrop 2004-12-04 . chapter 1*does a little jig* I have been away from the fan fiction scene for a very long time now, and decided to drop by for a little visit...luckily i found this wonderful (or shall i say marvelous?) little ditty. That was such a fantastic little way of describing Hermione's thoughts about Ron...just tickled me from the inside out :P. Wonderful job, Len, and I hope i'll be able to find some time to stop by again ;)
hugs, luv, and a feather in Ron's hair,
~Lemondrop~ |
 Pedagogie 2004-09-16 . chapter 1cute! i like it! |
 ProudMuggleGirl 2004-09-09 . chapter 1awesome, quite awesome. |
 AerinBrown 2004-09-03 . chapter 1O...EVIL! I thought that she was going to *kiss* him and she didn't! Anyway, that was marvelous. I adore Ron and Hermione (though I don't think anyone will blame me that 90% of that affection is directed towards Ron). You made Ron seem so sweet, with his little owl, and did an awesome job writing Hermione's thoughts: very simple, and good, and not sappy.
Keep up the excellent work! |
 Misshogwarts1125 2004-08-14 . chapter 1This is really good!! |