This was such a good story i was crying and laughing and happy that was realy touching i love this story in short

This was such a good story i was crying and laughing and happy that was realy touching i love this story in short

I know that it've past a lot of time since you wrote this, but i have to review this story; it made me read it whitout a pause, it was great! i feel that this could happen... maybe in a st valentine's OVA or something XD.

You're a great writer, i hope that you someday P read this - and sorry for the mistakes in my review, english is NOT my mother language and i'm still learning the language, well... i'm in the midle of the entire course P.

HOPE (well... if for some kind of situation you came back to FF P) you'll write more of these pairing.

bye bye! P

This was great! I usually go for he epic stories but despite this being short, it was to the point and well written with lots of character development and a good plot. I loved it!

I'm really curious about this Indian legend now, it sounds really cool. On a side note, I also share your opinion about GT. I was so excited when it came out and then I actually watched the show. What did they do to everyone? I was very disappointed.

Anyway, great job on this!

This is an awesome story! I can't stop reading, with all that suspense from Goku's disappearance. Its driven me crazy to know what's going on. And for Chichi to finally be able to fight once again, and for her to save Goku, now that's definitely something new and different. I am sooo happy when they got reunited and with Goku choosing to stay with her in the good planet instead of King Kai's. They had gone thru a lot in their lives back in earth, and finally they're together forever in afterlife. I am soo happy for them. I love them so much! You rock, girl! Awesome! Thanks for this story!

best read ever. The characters were so fleshed out & real.

that story was awsum wite another about gooku and chichi

Clap clap clap clap clap...Nicely done!Well actually,it's amazing!Thank you!

i usually dont comment so soon but... that was sooooo predictable... i mean hell is the first place i woulve checked lol

this is a good book do you ever make eney more books like this?

oh my god. I cried.

What's up with all of the Ramayana references? Lol I just found it funny, me being a Hindu. My name even is synonymous with shiva

This is how the Dragon Ball series should've ended.

Goku and Chichi happily ever after.

But alas, we are not to have that since Akira Toriyama is not THE romantic type.

Hahah, anyway, that aside. I REALLY, REALLY loved this fanfic.

The emotions were written so wonderfully that I really felt what the characters went through in this story. Not to mention, they were all kept in character too.

I enjoyed the addition of Misai (who does remind me of Rurouni Kenshin's Misao, which is funny since Chichi kind reminds me of Kaoru and well, Goku as Kenshin).

But anyway, they deserved their happy ending and thank you so much for making it so.

Oooh, that must have been a shock to Chichi.

This story is so good. Though despite that, I was able to force myself to stop reading for a sec and comment how I love Chichi's personality in this fic.

I think you capture her character's true essence, which is very rare in fanfiction, even in canon (sadly enough).

I loved Chichi in the DB series but when she started getting all shouty with Gohan and Goku and everything, I just think that it ruined her character.

But you brought back the Chichi I loved, the girl who helped Goku take the Vashon fan. SO I am happy :)

Not to mention, your story is sooo refreshing with the fact that it's Goku's turn to ask for help this time. And Chichi's doing the rescuing. Hah, how's that for a kick-ass plot?

Lol.

I looooove your plot.