This is just plain stupid. Nicer? Sure. Pointless and weird...

So, I read this story when I was like, fourteen, and it didn't seem nearly as stupid then. It's really, really stupid. A few funny bits, of course, but... eh.

I think my favorite part was Frieza:

"I DECIDED NOT TO! AND, OH MY! WHEN YOU LEFT, I LEFT TOO!"

Heehee...

Now I feel tainted for laughing at it. If I didn't love it when I was a kid, I'd hate it now. This kind of humor is old, and calling everyone a 'fag' isn't very nice.

And why do you hate Gohan? Gohan is cool. Tien is cool too.

W...wow.

I'm scared.

And scarred. For life.

...Uh...words cannot express how I feel right now. They just...can't.

It was still amusing, to say the least. :)

o_O funny, but. whoa. so many characters. so long.

HAHAHAHAHA THAT WAS THE MOST RETARDED FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ! XD LAWLZORZ! ROFLMAO.

That was hilarious!

... I'm as lost as Krillin. That was super funny! (takes breath) (takes another breath) HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AH HA H A (falls over and dies)

That was funny!

that has got to be one of the funniest things i have ever read! You are ultimate. *nods* yes you are. *love*

O ka-ay... 0.0

Good story anyway. I like the super sayian thing. :)

0.o; Okay... Very ,uh, queer. I give it three thumbs up! Yey!

This is the most stupidest retarded fic I hae ever read. You guys had to be high, or sleep deprived when you wrote this. Lol! Bit I loved the part when baby Trunks was driving and Vegeta was like "Good job baby trunks! You hit Choatzu! I'm proud of you son!"

WOW, that's messed up... and hilarious!

And you're right, 16 DOES look kinda like Recoome...

This...is the craziest piece of funny shit I've ever read. XD

I especially liked the line said by Vegeta, "You hit Choatzu! I’m proud of you, son!" XD XD XD Wonderful.

Hats off to you.

XD THIS IS THE BEST FICITON I'VE EVER READ YOU OWN XD

Hello! i love your stories! *Laughs psychoticly* did you see the very last episode of GT? Vageta's great grandson and goku's great grandson, who look EXACTLY like mini versins of the older versions are in the turnoment thing and Vegeta jr. goes super sayian and then Goku jr. goes super sayian and Vageta jr. goes

"Cool, you we can both go blond." or something similar in that slightly iritaiting voice, ONLY because he sounds so arrogant(AS ALWAYS).

PS. LONG HAIRED TRUNKS IS MY FVORITE! ONLY 'CAUSE I LIKE GUYS WITH LONG HAIR! LIKE KURAMA AND KENSHIN AND JEAN AND YOUKO AND ED AND BAKURA AND- OKAY HIEI IS MINE EVEN THOUGH HE DOESN'T HAVE LONG HAIR-OH WELL.

PPS. why is everyone a knave and not just a brain dead jock? or a moron?

Ja Mata Ne!