For some reason it's not letting me log on :(

"Darth-Mommy and Me!" time for Dustil :P

Whoa! I was holding my breath the entire time I was reading this one! A very good chapter, and I definitely wamt much more very soon, selfish as I am.

Thanks for the update!

Lilan

Great read as always! Can't get your website or any with the pictures to load. Is it a problem on my end or yours?

Can you have a near death experience for Dustil or Revan thrown in the mix in the next chapter or so?

Wow. Wow wow wow. Just finished reading what you've got so far, and I'm thrilled! Me, who doesn't normally read this kind of genre at all! (I mean spies and such.) Your characters are great, and so believable! I love your Revan (not the least because I'm fond of mint candy, hee hee) -- she has such amazing integrity to her, and I love the way she never turns into an angsty mess -- she has lots of bad moments, of course, but she wants and manages to deal with them. Dustil is priceless -- the kind of teenager that makes your hands itch to give him a good spanking, but cute nonetheless. And of course Carth, just the character I loved in the game.

I really hope you go on with this delightful story. I'm definitely looking forward to more chapters!

Lilan

Wow, an update!
Very nice work. Only thing is, it's been so long I can't remember a lot of the story, guess I need to do a lot of re-reading.

How the heck would the Sith have been able to hack into the orbiting defense system? A nice plot move on your part though, as I see a perfect opportunity for our heroes to go out & do something instead of sitting around at the command station.

Carth is still pretty banged up though, so I guess Revan and Dustil get to spend some "darth-mommy and me" time in the next chapter? ;)

Great chapter full of action and suspense. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Another astounding read! Can't wait to see more and the end to come, hopefully many chapters later!

AUGH! EVILEVILEVIL CLIFFHANGER! :D

Thanks for updating! Another great chapter :) I'm so glad you've gotten back to it, I can't even express it properly :)

Looking forward to see how they might get out of the nightmare scenario! :D

You updated! It was worth the wait!

interesting...

Absolute LOVE.

I love your Dustil. It's funny; sometimes it seems for chapters on end that he's totally okay with Revan, then something happens where he gets smacked in the head and reminded, "hey, it's Revan!"

I find that highly amusing.

You'd better continue this ;p

A really great update and I am so glad to see you are continuing this story still! I never got a emial of an update and decided to look and found it was updated. I really look forward to seeing how this all ends!

OMG, havn't even read the chapter yet, need to do some back reading to get my bearings again. GLAD UR BACK!

Hope you update again soon.