it's great update soon please.

this is way to similar to the original episode. the whole point is to tell you're version not just the few things that you would change.
sorry
sorry
sorry
but this could be so much better.

I thought Rory was going to live at home now that she's pregnant?

aw... i just started reading GGfics and i gotta say, i loved urs. ahss my fav. couplings were in this story. and i love the way you write. awesome. good job. pat on the back. hahas :P

This whole story ws awesome! You wrote the characters perfectly, and I just loved this entire story! I loved how you had Lindsay refer to Arielle Kebbel, so funny! The actress in character refering to herself, classic! I can't wait to read the sequel!

So perfect!

Great story!

This story was absolutly adorable.

I'm off to read the sequal!

Gah! I can quote entire scenes from that movie! I loved your story! I'm putting you on Author alert, 'cause I want the best of both worlds: Sleep and a sequel!

Jess showed up when Rory was on her way to delivery in the last chappy, then doesn't find out til after in this one. How does that hapen?

She shouldn’t have been stressing herself out about both Dad and Chris.

might want to rethink that.

Really sweet and good!

For what it is, it's somewhat decent. I cannot deny, however, that the stories that focus on Rory being pregnant are all beginning to sound the same, regardless of the father.

That was the sweetest story ever!

I think this is my FAVORITE Keg! Max! AU!! UPDATE SOON!