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Rishqva
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
Sweet, a bit sad and very original. Likes it!
Estrella85
2008-02-24 . chapter 1
So cute ^_^ I loved how it was funny but still a little emotional. :)
TheQueenOfMediocrity
2007-11-10 . chapter 1
I originally read this on your site, and you had the original drabble, and I agree that this is the better version. it's very sad and sweet, my favorite combination.
iheartbishies
2006-01-07 . chapter 1
Aww. This was such a great story! I'm glad you chosse to make it longer than a drable.^~ Defentily on my fav stories now. Yay for an Al story.
...I'm going to remember that and when (and if) I get married I've got to make my husband wear a suit of armor.XD
Chibi Cheesecake
2005-10-08 . chapter 1
Oh, very unique, very cute! *applauds* It's Al-centric, so it gets automatic brownie points from me! XD And boy, if I'd been at that wedding, I would've been freaking out about the suit of armor. I would've been like, "Al! It's AL!"
fightingcomet
2005-09-09 . chapter 1
that was so beautiful, i really liked the way you wrote it, starting it out as a game that evolved into something much more deep...great fic!
K. A. Maples
2005-08-18 . chapter 1
*dies of the giggles* This one's getting printed out and passed around the dorm! I love it, and I adore the homage to Pratchett!
Sharia*Earthborn
2005-05-26 . chapter 1
Wonderful. I laughed so hard after I read the part about the report... *snicker* my family thinks I'm insane. Funny, touching, and well written. Kudos to you!
Wan wingu no tenshi
2005-04-26 . chapter 1
I liked this very much as well. =)
Edhelith
2004-12-22 . chapter 1
I knew the title struck me as familar! It works quite well here (I loved Dorfl's "WORDS IN THE HEART CAN NOT BE TAKEN"). As for the whole heart/soul thing, they're pretty interchangable in this context. Well written and heartfelt, I thought. I'm glad you lengthened it from drabble status. Good work!
Henrika
2004-12-03 . chapter 1
It was a cute drabble. Very poignant. Keep writing!
Solaria735
2004-08-09 . chapter 1
That was so sweet. And funny. ^-^
BakuraObsession
2004-04-17 . chapter 1
The image of Al walking around with magnets all over him is pretty funny, I have to say. Even though Al doesnt technically have a heart, he's still got a (big!)heart in the spiritual sense, so it makes more sense as "heart" instead of "soul", in that context. That was a really good one! ;_; The theme thing was really awesome too! ...If I get married, I want MY husband to dress up in a suit of armor too >.>...
Lucrecia LeVrai
2004-03-28 . chapter 1
Very nice. A bit sad, yes, but that's exactly why I liked it so much.
SimplyAmazingRoxas
2004-03-26 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so sweet...I am now putting you on my fav authors list as well...you have a very composed writing style. ^^
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