 Rishqva 2009-11-06 . chapter 1Sweet, a bit sad and very original. Likes it! |
 Estrella85 2008-02-24 . chapter 1So cute ^_^ I loved how it was funny but still a little emotional. :) |
 TheQueenOfMediocrity 2007-11-10 . chapter 1I originally read this on your site, and you had the original drabble, and I agree that this is the better version. it's very sad and sweet, my favorite combination. |
 iheartbishies 2006-01-07 . chapter 1Aww. This was such a great story! I'm glad you chosse to make it longer than a drable.^~ Defentily on my fav stories now. Yay for an Al story.
...I'm going to remember that and when (and if) I get married I've got to make my husband wear a suit of armor.XD |
 Chibi Cheesecake 2005-10-08 . chapter 1Oh, very unique, very cute! *applauds* It's Al-centric, so it gets automatic brownie points from me! XD And boy, if I'd been at that wedding, I would've been freaking out about the suit of armor. I would've been like, "Al! It's AL!" |
 fightingcomet 2005-09-09 . chapter 1that was so beautiful, i really liked the way you wrote it, starting it out as a game that evolved into something much more deep...great fic! |
 K. A. Maples 2005-08-18 . chapter 1*dies of the giggles* This one's getting printed out and passed around the dorm! I love it, and I adore the homage to Pratchett! |
 Sharia*Earthborn 2005-05-26 . chapter 1Wonderful. I laughed so hard after I read the part about the report... *snicker* my family thinks I'm insane. Funny, touching, and well written. Kudos to you! |
 Wan wingu no tenshi 2005-04-26 . chapter 1I liked this very much as well. =) |
 Edhelith 2004-12-22 . chapter 1 I knew the title struck me as familar! It works quite well here (I loved Dorfl's "WORDS IN THE HEART CAN NOT BE TAKEN"). As for the whole heart/soul thing, they're pretty interchangable in this context. Well written and heartfelt, I thought. I'm glad you lengthened it from drabble status. Good work! |
 Henrika 2004-12-03 . chapter 1It was a cute drabble. Very poignant. Keep writing! |
 Solaria735 2004-08-09 . chapter 1That was so sweet. And funny. ^-^ |
 BakuraObsession 2004-04-17 . chapter 1 The image of Al walking around with magnets all over him is pretty funny, I have to say. Even though Al doesnt technically have a heart, he's still got a (big!)heart in the spiritual sense, so it makes more sense as "heart" instead of "soul", in that context. That was a really good one! ;_; The theme thing was really awesome too! ...If I get married, I want MY husband to dress up in a suit of armor too >.>... |
 Lucrecia LeVrai 2004-03-28 . chapter 1Very nice. A bit sad, yes, but that's exactly why I liked it so much. |
 SimplyAmazingRoxas 2004-03-26 . chapter 1Aw, that was so sweet...I am now putting you on my fav authors list as well...you have a very composed writing style. ^^ |