please finish your story !

Good chapter!

Yeah, you updated! Poor Mokuba, I hope he gets away safetly, and that woman, wonder what she's going to do to Pearl. Hehe, almost fogot what happened in the story since last time. UD soon!

^^ Heh! Mokie has a Ka! ^^ Awesome. ^^ It's been so long, but it's nice to have a new chapter. I'm glad Mokuba was able to get the box back, that part made me grin. Uh...didn't catch any mistakes, that I'm aware of, it all looked pretty good! ^^ Looking forward to the next chapter.

^_^ Priest!! Yay! ^^ This chapter was so cute! Though poor Pearl... *sniffle* I hope everything turns out all right... I mean! It has to! Priesty-goodness! XD Great chapter.

A R.A.G.-Orgoth fusion? Should be amusing. Looks like Pearls in trouble.

I cannot put into words on how excited I was regarding the voice Mokuba heard. Crazy I know, but this is one of the rare fics that have Priest Seto done well, whether he is good or has a cold demeanor. Awesome work! Anyway, smooth reactions between Mokuba and Pearl. I liked how you referred to Ryuji and Amber's marriage concerning the fusion of their monsters. Oh and one more thing: You added Duke in the second last sentence in the second last scene instead of Ryuji. Just to let you know.

-That first part was so dramatic. Poor Pearl... Man, I don't know what to feel now. I feel sorry for Pearl, but Mokuba was right.
-Priest Seto is here!
-Amber's and Duke's monsters are fusing together. Yay! This is very exciting! This is most like the Japanese Yu-Gi-Oh! series. M hmm, indeed.
-The black girl?! Uh-oh...

I was wondering...will there by chance be any appearances by Priest Seto? Anyway, good chapter. Poor kids! IMO, the bloody parts weren't that graphic and there are some PG movies/stories out there that have blood and more violence. I think you're okay with a PG rating. But it's up to you of course. =)

-In the beginning sentence, you should put 'him' instead of 'he'.
-Bloody? It was great! It was kind-of gross with the detached arm, but it was cool! In fact, this is one of my favorite scenes from this story!
-Pearl you--! What... Er... Atem! Why did she have to do that?
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I wonder how they'll save the Millennium Puzzle... Hmm...

Pearl you IDIOT! Oh hell...

Armored Zombie? I figured if Bonez's Ka was a Zombie (which, of course it would be. he's Bonez) it would have been Dragon Zombie. No matter.

*sigh of relief* I thought Mokuba was toast! o__o; Almost had me there... I wonder if Mokuba has a Ka? ^^ I bet it'd be cute! The action scenes where great! Ryuji lopped an arm off! XDD Wow, bet that must've been fun... ^-^ Another great chapter-- brings sniffles to my... er... nose, knowing that P.Seto is dead though... ^^ But then I just go to Attack of the Ninja... XD

o.O Mokuba's been captured! I hope he escapes all right... ^-^ Wonderful chapter!

I assume the other one is God Orgus?

Can't wait for the next chapter! I asked when you were going to update this when I reviewed your other story. Sorry 'bout that. Didn't get to this one till after. =)