I actually felt what he was feeling.

The passing breeze…

The flow of memories in my head…

The touch of his skin…

The bittersweet feeling too…

I didn’t cry but it was a wonderful fic.

I know how it feels to lose someone you love.

It’s one of the best death fics I’ve ever read.

Aw! Not a huge fan of TezuRyo, but it's very sweet.

that was beautiful, you made me cry! i usually hate deathfics but yeah this one was beautiful!

aw... it was touching, yet heart-wrenching. but you managed to protray Ryoma like a sleeping princess or an angel. and that was too, too precious. :D

i don't like death fics, and i seriously doubted whether i should read this or not at first. im glad i did. :) i think i can make an exception for this one.

it's a very beautifully written story. so sweet and so sad, nearly cried...stupid emotions.

do you only ahev 1 chapter for this story? I'm so disppointed,this is SUCHA good story! Love it.

*cries* That was so sad. Why did Ryoma die? Poor Tezuka. TT I loved the writing style. It was awesome. Very heart-felt too. _

Nice...but heart wrenching.

You write a beautiful TezuRyo.

Cheers

*sniff sniff* wah... it was a tear-jerker fic. i love it. *grabs more tissue*

That was lovely... But angsty...

This was so sad. I usually hate deathfics, and will continue to hate them forever... I had TEARS in my eyes! You are a wonderful author.

Ah TT
Why did you kill Ochibi?
Poor Buchou.
Ne, promise to write more sweet TezuRyo? :)

SCORE! angst :D O

That was very well written, and quite lovely, but so sad! Wah!

That was so awesome. It brought tears to my eyes.