Nice story, can't wait for chapter 3. xDD

This is one of the first Zelda fics I've read, and I like it. Will whatever happened to Link be revealed or be kept a dark secret?

This is... awsome... please update!

This is a different fic, and I really, really like it.

This...corrupted Link is so intriguing. I can't help but wonder just what happened to him, and how Sheik is going to be able to help, if in fact he even can.

It's been a while since this has been updated, but hopefully with Soda's challenge, you'll feel up to it.

Thanks very much for sharing.

oh poor link whatever did happen to him? is he and sheik going to get together anytime soon please update

I really hope you update this soon...

gr...cliffhanger. I wanna know what happens! please don't take forever to update! I hate it when people don't update!

hey! your story is really great! I know you havn't worked on it in a long time, but I would love to see more!

Omg I love this story!^^
Totaly love love! *dance*

"The monster on my back ways far to much"
- two mistakes in that half a sentence. 'weighs' and 'too'

hm... an odd take. i don't know why this would be all sheik's fault, but it seems interesting...

this is an unusual take on link. id like to see where this is going. seriously im hooked. please write the next chapter soon!

Please, please please review! I reread a few times today, and counting all the other times...I've read it a lot. But please! Make a third chapter! This story is just too good to keep waiting!

I really liked it. ^-^

Ahoy! Hello there! Told ya I really liked your fanfiction!
You just have such a great style and the imagery and emotions described...Gads! This is so well done, please continue, you inspire me to draw even more stuff!
It's like you write everything I feel about Link...how his childhood was distroyed, how he was forced to grow and do the dirty work... wow, just amazing.

Is he still innocent? I mean...there has to be at least some innocence in him...ne?
Is there at least a tiny flicker of the old Link inside of that shell? I hope Sheik can help, and this being a yaoi and all! LOL I have to read this!
Please continue...and keep on writting Act 1: Trial of a Man. I'm hooked!! Haven't read that much since the Lord of the Rings!
Please continue soon, youre killing me.

I submitted a new picture at my gallery
http://elenath-.deviantart.com
It's tittled "Don't Mess" Hope you like it!

My gosh, wow, I love it! But please, I know for sure I'll go insane if you don't update! Please! It's awesome! ^--^ Finally, somewhat DarkLink badass, wooho!

I like where this story is going! -sigh- It's amazing how you can keep writing such amazing fics. ^_^ Well, I'm glad for it! I hope that you update it at least semi-soon, or something like that. :P Whenever you get a spark for it. Also, the part where Sheik was listening to the guards at the end...for one chapter you swapped into third POV, and then you went back into the first POV. ^^; Just thought I'd point out that mistake...well, I hope to read more of this story soon~! ^^