Very nice! Bravo!

Very interesting concept you have here! It never occurred to me, but it makes SO much sense. And I always liked Carlotta's voice. Yes, I like a slightly younger, more naiive Erik having some kind of relationship with Carlotta. Merci! ^^

That was really, really good! Kind of sad, but it was written very well. :) You've got some real talent!

First of all, you are awesome for being a Carlotta-lover. xD We are a rare breed.

Second, I do love your skill, and for such a short peice, you captured the characters very well. I am eversoimpressed.

Oh, wow, that was beautiful. I really loved it. I a huge fan of La Carlotta, and I'm glad that you didn't turn her into a poisonous ** like most do. I really loved this part:

"They had been pure white lilies, the symbol of innocence and purity. She had trod on them.

I had always liked flowers, they were so beautiful and full of life. I, this deformed wreck of a creature, barely human, had oft liked to gaze upon their fresh loveliness, and wondered, if there was a God, how one who had created me had also created this most exquisite thing."

It was very beautiful.

Painfully lovely. Just can't seem to stop reading your stuff! Carlotta is a wonderful character to get into, if only because she's rather underdeveloped. This was well done!

this is great

Tsk tsk... Carlotta, you **.

Hey girl, this is god! Could do with a bit more description, but don't give up just yet ;-)

I really enjoyed this story. Carlotta is one of my favourite Phantom characters, and this was perfect! I also liked how the story was told from Erik's point of view. Absolutely fabulous!

DUDE! That was so ORIGINAL! I LURVE this! Go you!

Whoo! That was really good! Correct me if I'm wrong (I probably am, seeing how I haven't read the book or actually SEEN the play YET) but isn't Carlotta Italian or something? The lyric booklet in my CD says Signor and Signora...
Yay! This is awesome!

Creepy... but good. Very different from what I had expected, but you really got into the mind of Erik. This was *very* good indeed. Congrats on a fantastic job!

Oh, mythology allusions. Singular. And FORESHADOWING!excessive punctuation! Anyone who says they don't like Carlotta is a hypocrite. There is a little bit of Carlotta in all of us. A little more in LP.

I loved it. And I hate Carlotta. But you did portray her so well. I understand about liking characters that aren't very important.