Hmm...was that Bakura? *shrugs* Oh how I loved it! So dark! I wish i could make one like that... but thats too much to wish for. Please make more like these. Dark and Angsty! Bye! *adds story to favorites*

um... yugixyami? yayness it rymes! have u noticed there r very few of these? thanks 4 reviewing mine.

wicked, this was very cule. I cant guess the pairing though, MaiXJoey? I dunno, lol, but wateva, it was cule.
could u R/R my 'The Ties of Friendship' fic? It'd be much appriecated,
ja ne.
Cassie.

Tragic I think it could fit any couple. The most I like is Ryou and Yami Bakura or Seto Kaiba and Serenity Wheeler.

What a sad poem, its so in depth and emotional. Hmm, lets see, I think the pairing might be Yami Bakura and Ryou right? I was guessing since Ryou used to fear Bakura and there are several fics out there where Ryou cuts himself because of Bakura. Please tell the answer soon, I liked it.

Mina: I don't normally write poems so I can't really give constructive critisism. Which reminds me! I have to type up the sonnet for my LAR class that my two friends and I wrote! NO! Why are they making me do it? Why can't they do it?
Kaiya: That's a stupid question. They're working on the school play so they are to be there for every performance. You even saw them there last night just sitting in the back with their FREE seats watching the play. They're bound to go to the performance on Saturday and Sunday.
Mina: But they said that they didn't have to go to every performance of Once On This Island.
Kaiya: Whatever! You get what I mean.
Mina: U Sorry you had to listen to our argument. I enjoyed reading this. You are a great poet! I think you either had Ryou and Bakura in mind or Malik and Marik or (sadly) Yugi and Anzu. That's all I think I have time to say now! Gotta go! Ja!

Wow I love it! I think the pairing you had in mind might me Ryou and Bakura(Yami Bakura) but it really could fit with any couple!
I like the poem it has a clear rhythem and a nice texture to it, I really can't find anything wrong about it! You should do more poems like this one!