|Reviews for Calamity's Breach|
| Darksouled Saiyanphoenix 8/25/08 . chapter 40
Now that ending was totally and completely unexpected...I cant wait too see how this came about
| Yami Umi 8/22/08 . chapter 40
closure *-* Well, what's not freaking awesome was the Kagura betraying Sesshoumaru part... actually, what wasn't even cute. Not cute at all T.T I kind of like (this) Kagura, it would be a shame if she revealed herself as the enemy. And by the way, I knew the Mamoru thingy long way before this chapter I mean, a quiet, silent type? I don't trust quiet, silent types. Specially if they are bodyguards! SPECIALLY if they're bodyguards protecting someone who is very important and absolutely defenseless...
Oh well, I liked the chapter, though D Closure RULES!
| moviefan-92 8/21/08 . chapter 40
I nearly sh*t myself when Sesshomaru shouted Kagura's name. I was like, no way in hell! Then you brought out Kajuu, and again, I was like you're sh*tting me! But thank goodness its not Kagura. Great chapter by the way. Love the interaction between the boys and girls. But don't forget about Kagome, she NEEDS to come back.
Sorry to hear about all you're dilemmas. Hope you get better soon and stay healthy.
| Shisoukengo 8/21/08 . chapter 40
Hey there, Geofount-san. Sorry to hear about your job closing, I went through a similar experience a couple of years ago as well. Anyway, just wanted to say another excellent job well done! And yes, I did enjoy this new chapter, as I'm sure you can already tell. Your story is one of the few I still read from the Inuyasha fandom, and to be honest, I had never suspected Kajuu to be the mastermind behind everything. The way you kept that hidden up until this point was nothing short of genuis. I honestly didn't put it together until the middle of Sesshomaru's interrogation of Jogon.
Looking back on it now, I should have suspected something when he shifted the suspicion toward Jogon. Kajuu had seemed a little too eager to direct it toward the falcon demon at the time. It'll be quite interesting to see how this develops, so you have my eager attention. Also, just out of curiosity, what did you think of the ending to the Inuyasha series?
| senbo-sama 8/20/08 . chapter 40
You know, when he shouted "Kagura" I was like, "...wtf?" but, now seeing Kajuu, I feel better... kind of. A little confused, does he just need the ride from Kagura to get out to save Rin? But uh, I'm ready for Kohaku to come in the shining armor now! :D Also, the scenes in this chapter were cute, especially the Kohaku-and-Shippo-FINALLY-interact scene; very well played out. :) Well, three chapters doesn't sound bad at all, especially if you get them out, you know, like, REAL SOON. lol Seriously, keep the update pace up, or else I'mma gonna die. x3
| Raniatlw 8/20/08 . chapter 40
Awesome, awesome chapter! Finally we find out that Kajuu is the bad guy. I had my suspicions all along. But I was really surprised to see that Mamoru is also in on it.
Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
| nessie6 8/20/08 . chapter 40
OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD I WAS RIGHT! I WAS RIGHT! I mentioned my theory in my review for chap. 38, I think, but that was when you didn't make review replies, so I didn't know what you thought about it! AHH! Yes! Epic battle! Please! I need some Kohaku demon-slaying action, yeah! I always suspected Kajuu! Whoo! Yess! And I CAN'T believe you left off both endings (Sesshoumaru's and Rin's) where they did! Thank God you aren't waiting years to update this anymore! Sorry if this review is less coherent than it should be, but damn, I'm excited!
Now that they're in danger, they'll realize their BURNING LOVE for each other!
| Destatikai 8/20/08 . chapter 40
The assassins are revealed! o.o
It's so amazing how long this story has been in the making... I remember I found this story so long ago, back when I was still very much so obsessed with the Inuyasha series. That obsession has very much so abated, but I still read this because I am so completely in love with its plot and how the characters have developed after everything that's happened. Now, I can't believe we finally have closure! The ending is coming, and I don't know whether to celebrate at knowing the outcome or to be a bit saddened that one of my favorite stories is finally coming to an end...
Anyway, enough of the somber comments, I have to say that I suspected Mamoru for such a long time, haha. But Kajuu? I still don't quite understand the motives, but I guess I'll have to wait 'til next chapter. I loved the Souten and Rin moments, but I thought the Shippo and Kohaku moment was absolutely adorable! I couldn't help but laugh and Souten kicking Shippo back in the pool, too.
Oh, and thanks much for the reference back to the Kagome event! (I almost cried yet again.) Loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one!
| sunnyblueskyes 8/20/08 . chapter 40
ZOMG! I loath my sense of logic.
Ugh. I refused to believe that it was Kajuu.
He was one of my favorite characters in your fanfiction too...
I need to go sulk.
Please update soon. I'll -kinda- be looking forward to it.
| alyss92 6/25/08 . chapter 39
Your fanfic is amazing. I love your writing. I've been reading your story non-stop for the past couple of days so my eyes can finally rest now. lol xD You have officialy made my new favorite pairing Rin/Kohaku. I just need to find another great fic with them in it now. The one thing Im sadden about is that now Kagome is more miserable then she was before and that she's not with Inuyasha. T.T I can't wait for the next update.
| Raniatlw 6/23/08 . chapter 39
More Rin and Kohaku goodness! Yay! I loved this chapter, it was awesome. And it was nice to see Inuyasha and Miroku in it too. It's been a long time. Anyways, update as soon as you can.
| Darksouled Saiyanphoenix 6/22/08 . chapter 39
I am so glad that they have finally opened up to each other i think it will make things alot easier for each other! I loved the garden by the way!
| Destatikai 6/22/08 . chapter 39
AH! This is the chapter that I've been waiting for! I can't believe that the story has reached this point, haha. To be honest, when I was reading about Kagome in this chapter, I completely forgot what happened to her in the first few chapters of the story, and I don't think I'll be able to find those parts again... ;
I can't wait for the next chapter now that Rin and Kohaku have finally received closure for their pasts!
| ezap3 6/22/08 . chapter 39
It's been awhile since I've read any Kohaku/Rin fluff. And this chapter is an amazing example of what I needed. Well it's late and I don't want to bore you with my drabbling. Great chapter!
| senbo-sama 6/21/08 . chapter 39
Oh my god, that Kohaku/Rin scene was beautiful. 600! ...uh...how much longer chapter wise do you think it'll be? YOU MUST UPDATE!