I wish you'd write a sequal to this. About the fallout consequences of Jack's drunken actions.

You could go alot further with this story. However it had a very serious impact. It was dark but I like the fact you explored things that are very prominent in society without becoming too graphic. Excellent work.

That was well written, you are a VERY good writer. Can you do another chapter, PWEASE? I wanna know what happens when Jack wakes up!
I'll love ya forever!

Cz