wow.

i kinda wish Cordelia had told the scooby's her wish.

i would have loved to see the others reactions.

Hoo boy...

Now THAT was dramatic.

Not only did you clearly explain from the beginning WHY Cordelia made THIS wish rather than her original one- certainly shows how much more mature she’s become in this timeline, really-, but the world you subsequently created was VERY effective.

The idea of the demons creating a new circle of Hell just to cope with the new arrivals was a VERY interesting little twist, even BEFORE we witnessed what happened to everyone in that world (Interesting explanation regarding how we can still have a ‘Vamp Willow’ present without the original Wishverse; any chance she’ll be coming back in the future?)

And as for your explanation of WHY vengeance demons wouldn’t like the idea of the world being sent to Hell...

Pure GENIUS in its simplicity, to say the least; who’s thinking about vengeance on other humans when everyone’s already being tortured on a regular basis?

Plus, as you said, having everyone retain their memories was a definite plus; I’ve never liked those stories which operate on a ‘Reset Button’ theme where the only way to stop things is to COMPLETELY erase everything that happened, as it just seems so pointless to have something that big- the destruction of Earth, a ship blows up, that kind of thing- happen if nobody’s going to learn from it afterwards.

Keep up the good work!

"Knowing our luck, Santa Claus will turn out to be a child-eating demon or something."

Xander managed to laugh. "Like that would ever... oh God, I just jinxed it, didn't I?"

VERY FUNNY! I managed to get through all nine, its very interesting, please continue soon!

That was a little easy to get everything back, Cordy and Anya's part in ot being downplayed a little.

Keep the parts coming.

Wow. I really liked that ending. I was surprised at how much I liked that ending, considering the disturbing events that happened there. There was a healthy level of what happened for everyone. Is Faith's nightmare going to factor in to further plots, or will we ever know what happened? Well, I for one am really looking forward to Christmas, especially as I could do with a little bit of cheer, after a nice, horrifying trip to hell. But, UPDATE!

Excellent ending. I'm glad they all remembered, although I do kinda wish Cordy had told them what she wished. Might've made Xander feel better. Although it doesn't justify what he did, it does make you glad he did it. Anyway, I eagerly await the next installment.

Nicely done!

This was a great story and I found Cordelia's behavior to be right on target. She was my least favorite character on the show (although Spanky and Anyanka made her look decent by comparison) but you managed to make her almost sympathetic.

Awesome! I loved how Anya got up and kicked ass. YOu kept her wonderfully in character. I was expecting Buffy to be there but abused but...damn. Kewlness though. I thought it was nice to have someone else be the center and also the ...sort of...heroine. Great writing!

Go Cordy! Yay! For a minute, you had me scared with that whole lying-there-quite-dead thing, but then Anya got up and I was like "ha! I knew it!" I quite liked the interaction between the demons. Very nice dialogue. And, of course, I can't wait for the next chapter.

wonderful. I love Cordelia being smart enough to figure out Anya's reference, then again Cordy always was smarter than she appeared.

I hope that Cordy remembers nothing, just like in the show. It always amused me that she learns nothing from her experiance.

Finally, how come you haven't been posting this to LJ?

Cool! I'm so glad Cordelia's learned to keep her mouth shut-even if it took going to hell to do it.

I truly hope that the non-killing clause for vengeance demons is still active...

Looking forward to the next installment

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Get Anya to become Cordy's sis in some way and live with her, he he. There have to be consequences for wishing the whole world into hell.

Keep the parts coming